雅思英語作文在線批改

⑴ 雅思作文跪求大神修改！求打分！（請勿用批改軟體）

也就六分吧，雖然內容還好，用詞還算可以，但是邏輯性不強，論點論據論證闡述不專明確。
好好整理一下邏輯屬結構，和用一些提分的單詞，分數可能會達到6分以上。 (再有仔細點 e.g. pay for workers extra work）

⑵ 一直說新奇雅思有寫作批改的 具體怎麼弄啊

就是你寫作文，他們那請專業的老師給你改。我弄過一張，感覺還行。老師專改的挺負責挺屬仔細的，邏輯啊，語法啊，內容結構布置啊，連拼寫錯誤都給改出來了。。額。我錯了好多。。丟人。。 從我個人的感覺來說，如果你這4篇都是認真寫的話，收獲還挺大的。

⑶ 想要尋求免費的雅思作文批改，哪裡有

可以去批改網上注冊一個賬號。如果能幫到你，請採納。

⑷ 雅思作文請批改！！！！！

第一段：
the future and present --- 改為 the future and the present

that it semms impossible to find a balance between them.--改為 that it seems to be impossible that figuring out a balance between each other.

I believe both the countries and indivials should have a clear awareness of what is vital to nowadays and the prosperity in the future days.---改為 it is believed that both conutries and
indivials ought to have clear views of what is considered as vital to nowadays society and prosperity for the future.

第二段：

As for countries,it depends on the develpment of it.Thait means developed and developing countries should focus on different topics. 改為: For countries, whether the further or the present is important is defend on their development, which means that the focusing topics are different for developed regions and developing countries.

還有很多需要該的地方............

⑸ 哪裡有免費批改雅思作文的。。。。

我教你個方法，你去各個雅思培訓的網站，裝作要去報名，有的要注冊一下，然後上面就有試用次數，用完瞭然後換一個網站就行了

⑹ 有能批改英語作文的app嗎雅思

同學你好！
你可以登錄朗閣寫作一對一批改頁面進行作文提交批改，名師點評專會通過郵箱反饋給你哦。屬
地址http://www.longre.com/topic_2013/zt/ysnh_1015/zuowen.aspx

⑺ 求雅思作文批改（小作文而已，100懸賞，跪求老師改作文）

以下希望能幫到你：

The table (or "graph") shows the data about the breakdown of different kinds of Australian people in 1999.

It indicates obviously that the aged took up the least proportion in comparison to all the other types of people. Among them, the single aged people's proportion was 6%, while the couples was about 4%. Thereafter, the single aged had made a dramatic cause in bringing about the impoverishment. The Australian people who remained single, no matter they had child or not, occupies the biggest number in the table (or "graph") , which is about double of the people who were married. What is more ,as it can be told by the table (or "graph"), most of the Australian people were tended to form populous families —— getting marriage, having children, or living together with all the members of the whole family. In conclusion, there was only a few people lived in poverty in that time.

⑻ 哪兒有免費的雅思作文批改比較好的

把你的習作貼到太傻上去吧。。會有很多熱心網友批改。別的免費的還要比較好的就不大現實了。

⑼ 求批改英語作文(IELTS)

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?

Should men and women be equal? This is a much talked about question nowadays. In fact, sex is always a barrier for a woman to achieve their success in her career. I firmly believe that women should be given the same right as men, because they are equally important in all human activities.

First of all, with the rapidly development of society and economy, there have emerged many working opportunities and women are certainly as intelligent as men if they have a same ecation. Therefore, some high-level jobs are more occupied by women than the past. As this result, it proved that women have the same abilities as men. Personally, it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the abilities of men and women and it should be according to indivial abilities and not focus on the gender.

Secondly, the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Not all women are bad at business, just as not all men are poor interpersonal communicators. For example, if men are often calm and thoughtfully, but some men are more careless and hesitant than women? Beside, if women are always sensitive, then what would you say when they are insensitive in work or interpersonal. Obviously, there are no absolute advantages when considering their gender.

In conclusion, as a man, I would hopefully see that more outstanding women can be working their favourite jobs and can get their desirable position. Because a person』 indivial ability is far more important than their gender.

⑽ 哪裡可以免費批改雅思作文最好是網上。謝謝。。

其實，現在很多的雅思作文批改都不是免費的，而且很多雅思作文批改的老師的內收費都很高，我也是一容名雅思考生，我的雅思作文都是到雅思作文救星上面批改的，雅思作文救星可以說是唯一一個支持免費批改雅思作文的，除了有作文的分數之外，還有非常詳細的點評和講解！