新媒體的利弊雅思英語作文
『壹』 求一篇雅思的英語作文
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government』s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials』 sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.
這是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文範文,相信對你有用,你也可以去看看其它的範文。
『貳』 雅思英語作文 快餐的利與弊
說真的,樓上這文頂多5.5分!
第一句就夠倒考官胃口的了!十個考生8個是回這樣的!答還是用這個吧!
There is a general debate nowadays about the problem of fast food.
說真的這篇,太常見了!所有人都是這么模仿的!
『叄』 備考雅思:task2的利弊類作文到底應該怎麼寫
說到雅思寫作利弊類話題大家的第一反應就是典型的考試指令「Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?」或者是「Is it a positive or negative development?」 這種特別直接的提問方式是有助於我們快速定位到題目的答題要領的,但是殊不知在其他的提問方式中,其實也隱藏了很多利弊類的題目。我們先給大家呈現幾道相關的題目。
1. More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?
2. News media have become more influential in our life. Some people think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3. Some people think robots are important to our society, while others believe they are dangerous and have negative effects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
先簡單和大家分析一下這樣三道題目。這三道題乍眼一看沒有任何相關的地方,無論是從話題方向上還是提問方式上,其中:
第一題是生活類話題方向,提問方式是優缺點比較,但文章重點要把安全措施利弊的側重點體現出來;
第二題是新聞媒體類方向,提問方式是同意不同意,但文章重點是在討論新聞媒體是否是消極的發展;
第三題是科技類方向,提問方式是雙邊討論類,但文章重點是分別討論機器人的利弊問題。
仔細把題目讀完之後,我們就會發現其實無論怎麼出題,核心內容就是針對某一個特殊主題討論利弊。但是文章的答題要點是不一樣的,第一題是典型的偏向性作文;第二題可以有偏向,也可以中立,甚至也可以一邊倒;第三題是權衡的寫法(類似於中立)。不管怎麼說,我們首要的還是要會讀題。本文中,筆者將和大家一起來探討典型的利弊類作文「Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages」的寫作技巧,希望能給各位考生在後期的備考中有一些幫助。
1. 利弊類作文的詞彙儲備
利弊類題目的寫作核心是討論利弊,所以對於烤鴨們來說首先就應該去積累相關的表達優缺點的詞彙,這樣可以有助於在作文中表達觀點。
a. 優點常用詞彙:advantages, positive effects, benefit, merit, important, effective, pro
常用短語:be helpful/useful to; make contributions to; play a key role in; have profound/far-reaching effects on
b. 缺點常用詞彙:disadvantages, demerits, negative effects, con, defects
常用短語:cause problems; be harmful to; be detrimental to; pose a threat to; pose a risk to
2. 利弊類作文的段落書寫
當我們已經對於固有詞彙有了一定的了解之後,那下一步工作就可以進行題目的剖析,然後展開段落的書寫。
我們以第一題為例:
More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?
題目翻譯:現在在很多大城市裡有越來越多預防犯罪的措施來提高城市的安全性。你認為這些措施的優點大於缺點嗎?
a. 題目關鍵詞
1). urban areas這個詞很多考生在讀題的時候容易把它忽略不看,這是一種錯誤的讀題方法,因為這類詞是典型的地點限制詞,會對題目的論點把控起到一定的提示作用。它的同義替換詞可以是city center或者是downtown, 它的反義詞是rural areas, outskirts或者是countryside。
2). security measures或者是anti-crime measures是這道題目的核心詞彙,要拿下這一道題目,我們就得進行一定的頭腦風暴,想出有哪些常見的安全性措施,例如監控(monitoring systems), 安檢(security check), 警察巡邏(police patrols)等。
b. 考試指令的分析
顯性的利弊類話題最典型的提問方式就是「Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?」 這種題目的解題技巧就在於怎麼把「outweigh」這個詞在文章中具體地體現出來。它的一些同義表達有greater, more than, exceed等。對於這種提問方式,我們一般給出如下建議。
1). 首先我們需要做的就是在文章的比例方面要有一定的側重性體現。一般如果認為優點大於缺點的時候,那我們在優點這個段落上的字數建議要100字左右,用2-3個論點來支持。而對於缺點來講,就可以少寫一點,字數建議在80字左右,用1-2個論點來支撐中心句。
2). 除了文章長短之外,還有要注意到的就是語氣問題。同樣的如果認為優點大於缺點的,那我們在表達優點的時候就要使用比較堅定的態度或詞彙(should, be supposed to, ought to), 而在表達缺點的時候,語氣適當可以放弱(may, might)或者給出一些可行的建議來弱化它的缺點。
c. 段落示範
在完成了上述的審題過程之後,我們就可以進行全文的書寫了。
1). 先是開頭部分
優缺點類作文的開頭部分和其他的提問方式沒有太大的區別,也是由背景、題目改寫以及個人觀點三部分來構成的。這里重點和大家講解一下最後一句個人觀點的表達方法。推薦句式:
In my opinion, the positive effects are greater than the negative ones.
I think there are more advantages than disadvantages.
From my perspective, although there are some drawbacks, the influence can also be beneficial in many cases.
總結一下,上面三句話的核心意思就是想告訴大家碰到利大於弊這種類型的題目,一定要在開頭觀點部分把它表達清楚,千萬不能有模稜兩可的情況,不然task response這一塊分數就會減少。
2). 當開頭基本明確要求之後,就要開始主體段的寫作了。正如之前分析的,主體段分為兩段,優點和缺點各一段就可以了。先來回憶一下一個段落是由中心句加上幾個論點的形式構成的,論點一般推薦2個。
我們以上面那道題目為例:
1). 先來寫好處的中心句
學生句子:Indeed, having security measures has many advantages for local citizens. (10 words)
句子評價:這一句話就內容和句式上來說並沒有錯誤,但是它基本只能符合5.5分的水平,因為它在詞彙使用和內容豐富性上還是稍微差了點。
教師句子:It is obvious that the installation of security measures in buildings and on streets is an effective means of local citizens』 safety. (22 words)
句子評價:這個句子出彩的地方在於其詞彙的多樣使用,例如installation這個詞,動詞變名詞的用法在作文中的使用頻率還是比較高的。另外an effective means這個短語搭配也不錯,是學生句子中的advantages的另外一個表達。使用in buildings and on streets這個介詞短語來修飾句子可以更好地和之前頭腦風暴中的點相結合,體現內容的充實性。
2). body 1論點的論證(好處段)
這個點最重要的推薦論證手法就是舉例論證,分別對於室內和室外兩種不同的安全措施進行詳細描述即可。但是一定要注意的就是要把優點寫清楚,不然在任務完成度上就不能有一個很好的體現。
a. 室內的措施---監控---起到震懾和提醒作用(與中心句中的in buildings形成一致)
For example, 24-hour surveillance cameras can remind(語氣相對比較堅定) the would-be criminals that they have no chance to escape from the supervising(監管) of the police. Therefore, this kind of deterrent(震懾) makes those potential lawbreakers give up evil intension(罪惡念頭).(典型的舉例論證,37 words)
b. 室外的措施---警察巡邏---能夠及時抓住罪犯(與中心句中的on street形成一致)
Meanwhile, the frequency of police patrols(警察巡邏) can stop illegal activities(違法行為), such as thefts and robberies, thus recing the crime rate in open space directly and providing a safe living environment for local citizens. (典型的舉例論證,33 words)
一句中心句加上2個論證合在一起,整個寫好處的段落就是97個字,基本符合我們上面講解的100字左右的要求。
3). body 2論點的論證(缺點段)
缺點部分這一段落的具體寫法和好處是一致的,但是要注意的是由於觀點偏向於優點,所以這一段在篇幅上可以稍微短一點,語氣詞上也可以弱一點。
段落示範:However, what we have to bear in mind is that there are also some negative effects when taking too many security measures in large city centers.(缺點中心句) One of the most worrying effects(重點講一個方面即可) is that these anti-crime devices may increase(語氣詞弱化) the fear of crime and people』s freedom and privacy would be restricted or even invaded e to the surveillance cameras installed in many public places. All these may have a detrimental effect on people』s quality of life. (76 words)
主體段落書寫總結:段落的結構和論證形式在一定程度上和其他提問方式是一樣的。唯一的區別就在於我們應該如何挑選典型的優點和缺點來說服考官。
4). 結尾段的寫法
利弊類作文的結尾段還是分為兩要素。第一部分是觀點的總結,當然這一部分的觀點是可以根據正文部分有效輸入分論點的。第二部分就是可以針對缺點進行題目的升華,換句話說就是可以給出一些建議或者措施把缺點盡量減少或者消除。
『肆』 新媒體的優勢和特點英語作文
Advantages of new media
The so-called new media, compared with the traditional media, the difference between the new media and traditional media, does not lie in the emergence of time, but in the form of communication and content of different.
Once upon a time, the prevalence of the Internet, the instry has been lamented, the network media has become the fourth media after the newspaper, radio, television media. In a period of time, the network media has become synonymous with the new media, it seems that the introction of new media, people can not help but think of the network media. The Internet is the new media, however, that the new media network media is correct? The answer is not correct. The passage of time, the development of the times, the progress of science and technology, with more and more communication modes and content form emerging forms of media, such as digital TV, mobile TV, mobile phone SMS, building elevator advertising, mobile phone TV etc..
Finally, it can be made clear that the so-called new media, refers to all different from the traditional media in terms of a variety of forms of communication with the content of the form of continuous updates, emerging new media.
新媒體的優勢
所謂新媒體,是相對於傳統媒體而言的,新媒體與傳統媒體的區別,不在於出現時間的先後,而在於傳播方式和內容形態的不同。
曾幾何時,互聯網路的盛行,曾經使業內人士無不感嘆,網路媒介已經成為繼報紙、廣播、電視媒體之後的第四大傳播媒介。在一段時期內,網路媒介成了新媒體的代名詞,似乎一提起新媒體,人們都會不由自主地想到就是網路媒介。互聯網就是新媒體,但是,說新媒體就是網路媒體正確嗎?答案是不正確。時間的推移,時代的發展,科技的變遷,具有越來越多傳播方式和內容形態的媒體形式不斷涌現,如數字電視、車載電視、樓宇電梯廣告、手機簡訊、手機電視等等。
最後,可以明確地說,所謂新媒體,是指一切區別於傳統媒體而言的具有多種傳播形式與內容形態的不斷更新、不斷涌現的新型媒體。
『伍』 網路課程和傳統課程優缺點的英語作文
1Learning in the Internet and the tradictional learning are the most common method in our daily study and life.
2The two ways both have their advantage and disadvantage.
3Learning in the Internet has the advantage that it brings free time for students to study.
4Moreover,it can be watched repeatedly, which can deepen the impression.
5However,it also has the disadvantage that teacher cannot supervise the students' study.
6The tradictional learning supplyes the Internet's disadvantage, for it has a perfect supervise machism.
7But it doesn't mean the tradictional's has not shortcoming.
8It limit the students' freedom and let students' be passive.
『陸』 一個英語作文雅思的求一篇範文
可以從個人發展和社會發展角度去探討。
個人有權利追求更好的工作環境和待遇,以及在此專過程中自己水平的更屬大提升;
這些有技術的高層次人才在發達國家工作,有利於更好的發揮自己的特長,從而帶動全社會乃至全人類的發展和進步。
雅思還是要自己多寫多練啦~~
『柒』 雅思英語作文
建議抄首先可以參加襲北外雅思培訓班,上完課後要整理筆記,總結開頭-主體段落-結論的具體寫法以及常用的語言結構。
考前50~60天,練習句子翻譯考前40天,練習觀點和詞彙:挑選各個專題的話題若干,每天訓練觀點和詞彙構思+段落寫作;
考前30天:以熟練為主,完成寫作訓練。結合上課教授的寫作方法和思路+每天構思得來的觀點——不限時寫作(每兩天一篇)。
考前20天:挑選三種文體的代表作,請老師批改並面授點評,看看問題所在,有針對性提高和改正。
考前15天:限時寫作,每天一到兩篇,提高寫作的感覺和速度。
『捌』 出國留學的利與弊 ,英語作文! 急急急!
Advantages:It widens students' knowledge and horizons, meanwhile cultivats their independence and personalities. learn advanced knowledge and experience. Provides opportunities to students, who can learn advanced management experience. Then students have to deal with many problems whey they study abroad, thdy have to learn how to be accustomed to a new environment and how to get well with the teachers and classmates.By communicating with foreign students, they will see the differences from their own. Finally, can provide a good language environment and make it easy to pick up a language.
Disadvantages: students will confronted with many phychological problems. they feel lonely and helpness in a new environment.Futhermore, the tuition is too much , which is a heavy financial burden to the average people. Not only that, students may also experience homesickness when away from their families so long.
寫了論點,你自己整理下
『玖』 雅思英語作文2篇,要求每篇250字左右。
作文需要好好練習的