英語雅思高分作文例文

⑴ 雅思考試英語作文怎麼寫

雅思的作文一直都是很多人的短處，除了家喻戶曉地背，怎樣才能達到高分作文呢?下面和一起來看看雅思考試英語作文怎麼寫，如果想知道，不妨接著往下看。
1.觀點
“觀點”是考查確定問題類型的過程。讀完問題後要做的第一件事就是形成你自己的觀點。
有些題目是同意/不同意，也有其中一些是雙邊討論，給出兩種相反的觀點，然後去討論並給出自己的意見。首先需要的是一個明確的立場。同時，也需要基於你所處的立場獲得一個充分發展的位置，一個充分展開的觀點。
2.分段
根據你的觀點，把你的文章分成幾個段落。確定每個段落的核心內容和主體。
分段的要求是如何在評分規則中體現?高分的文章對分段都有這樣的評語“巧妙地管理分段”，指的是段落流暢的寫作技巧。
拿到一篇文章，在同樣的角度你可以想出多種合理的分段方法，並且在此基礎上可以選擇一種感覺新意，巧妙的分段方法。
大家都要注意的另一個對分段的要求就是“分段充分求合理”，也就是說，一定要在寫作過程中杜絕分段不充分的現象。分段不充分是把太多的想法擠在一段中。四到五個段落應該足以讓你的觀點被理解。確保每一段只有一個中心思想。
3.邏輯
英語是一種很有邏輯的語言，所以句子和段落之間的銜接非常重要。
段落之間的邏輯是以邏輯段落為基礎的。考慮段落的邏輯，然後要尋找使段落之間的過渡更自然的方法。要確保段落和段落、句子和句子都能有邏輯、無縫銜接。
4.語言
在完成前三個任務後，會發現你腦海中的出現是一個完整的中文版本的文章，或一個有基本單詞的英文結構。接下來就是組織和潤色這門語言。
詞彙方面的評分標准需要具有廣泛的不同的詞彙用法和結構。也要使用不尋常的詞彙，表達或搭配。
還要注意詞彙和語法的准確和靈活，以便可以更准確和更靈活地使用詞彙和語法。說話時不要太死板或機械。向考官展示你的語言運用情況。

⑵ 怎樣寫出雅思高分作文

每每看到高分作文，眼球為之吸引，思維也隨之而轉，真令人拍案叫絕，驚呼「後生可畏」！其實這些令人刮目的高分作文，常是考生多年的心血凝成的，是考生文思、文心隨手流瀉出來的生命之水。每篇高分作文都是活生生的「這一個」，我們用心去研究形成文字後的高分作文的「表層」特點，有利於後學者「形而下」地在「像」字上做文章；從高分作文的文字背後，諸如考生的思想、習慣、底蘊甚至思維等作深入的研究，從而找出其「深層」特點，讓一部分中分同學由此而得到啟迪「形而上」地走進高分作文的行列，讓不同個性的學生能在「表層」和「深層」兩方面「各取所需」，從整體上提高中學生作文水平。 高分作文都有其值得後人學習的閃光點，總在某一方面高出一般人，這「閃光點」和「高出」在哪裡呢？

扣題能力其實就是審題能力，審題能力強弱直接體現考生作文水平高低，因此，扣題行文常是高分作文一個既「普通」又重要的特點，語言表達達到一定水平，加之扣題行文，往往能得到一個比較高的分數。如果你不扣題，你天馬行空，你「一行白鷺上青天」，你得到的分數會讓你欲哭無淚。今年某校一高三學生參加高考，她的英語成績為140多分，而語文卻只有70 幾分，她無論如何不相信這個語文成績，去省招辦查閱，一查便暈倒：作文只得20分。非常明顯，該考生是一定是離題了。該省閱卷大組規定：離題作文20 分以下！去年獲全球美文大獎賽一等獎的南京某中學高三學生費瀅，她的高考作文只得25分，也是因為偏離題意而大跌其分。

扣題有明扣和暗扣，有表層扣和深層扣。所謂「明扣」，就是作文中要有材料中體現立意要求的文字，比如04年浙江省的高考作文題就要有「人文素養與發展」的字眼，而這些字眼需要在文中「多次顯現」，多次「反射」，強化閱卷者「該考生是扣題的」印象。「明扣」大多用於議論文和夾敘夾議文體。所謂「暗扣」，那就是作文中不要大量出現「材料中表達立意的文字」，而是在作文「立意」上表現出來，它往往在記敘文和文學味濃的文章中應用，往往在結尾處顯現。「表層扣」是指有「表現立意」的文字，是淺層次的，而「深層扣」則是精神的，深層次的，渾然一體的。高分作文要「深層扣題」。

⑶ 雅思英語大作文11.08.25,求一篇6分左右的範文，謝謝

思寫作參考書，我選哪本 在雅思考試當中最讓人頭疼的可能就是寫作了，見過太多的從4.5到5.5掙扎很多次卻依然距離6分很遙遠的同學，惋惜之餘，也在想什麼原因導致了這些同學的悲催現狀呢。 輔導資料我們並不缺，市面上各種寫作指導不下30種。寫作理論體系也不缺，什麼單邊式，雙邊式，讓步式，不一而足。對於一個7分的文章應該是什 么樣，大家也是各說各的。雖然有我們有統一的評分標準的指導，但是什麼人的解讀最有效呢?聰明的同學已經猜到了，當然是雅思考官。考官的標准才是我們唯一 需要遵循的標准。而考官的標准去哪裡找呢?毫無疑問，答案在劍橋雅思真題的範文。 我們現在用的最多的復習資料就是劍橋雅思的真題。大作文寫作有一個明顯的特點，那就是雖然話題多樣，提問形式多變，但是常考的話題也就那麼幾個，從劍橋4-到劍橋8，包括A類和G類文章在內，共有30個題目，基本涉及到了過半數的雅思寫作話題了。對於小作文，常見的四種圖形--線圖，餅圖，柱圖，餅圖--以及兩種不常見的圖形--地圖和流程圖--每一種類型在劍橋真題當中都有所涉及。 因而，同學們再准備寫作的過程當中首先要做的就是要將劍橋真題當真的9分考官範文做到熟讀成誦，熟悉其寫作

⑷ 求一篇雅思的英語作文

Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.

Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.

Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.

Government』s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.

Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials』 sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.

To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.

這是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文範文，相信對你有用，你也可以去看看其它的範文。

⑸ 雅思英文作文（只需150字左右）。要求精闢，有深度。

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Who should be most responsible for children's ecation? Give your opinion and reasons for it. You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Sample Answer
It seems to me that there is a clear-cut answer to this question. Although in the early years of a child's life parents are the principal ecators, that role is soon assumed very largely by the child's teachers. Even elder brothers and sisters, who may give good advice, can never take the place of teachers in molding a child's mind.
First and foremost, teachers know best in terms of ecation. They are professional ecators, and as such they are better equipped with expertise in teaching. It is in schools, too, that children make friends and learn how to act in a socially responsible manner. Teachers know best how to organize, motivate and discipline their students. Furthermore, as children spend most of their time in schools, teachers have more influence on them than their parents do.
Parents, on the other hand, are mostly either too busy to spend time with their children, or are ignorant of the right way to ecate them. This is not to say that parents can shirk (refuse to take) their responsibility for ecating their children. Parenting is an important factor that shapes competency and character formation in children. Failure to take such responsibility constitutes delinquency as parents.
Nevertheless, given the professional qualifications of teachers and the time they spend with their students, it is clear that the overwhelming burden of ecating children falls upon the shoulders of teachers.

⑹ 一個英語作文雅思的求一篇範文

可以從個人發展和社會發展角度去探討。
個人有權利追求更好的工作環境和待遇，以及在此專過程中自己水平的更屬大提升；
這些有技術的高層次人才在發達國家工作，有利於更好的發揮自己的特長，從而帶動全社會乃至全人類的發展和進步。
雅思還是要自己多寫多練啦~~

⑺ 雅思滿分，真有雅思滿分作文嗎

有的。

雅思滿分作文

It is certainly true that today traffic in cities throughout the world has become a major problem. This is
obvious from the number of vehicles on our roads and the amount of pollution they cause. Probably the
traffic problem is e to indivials travelling for work, study or shopping purposes, and this is evident in
the rush hours we experience every morning and evening.
It is also true that, these days, such daily commuting is not always necessary because people can do these
things from home. We can see this in the options Information Technology gives us today. For instance,
on-line work, distance learning and shopping facilities are all available via the Internet.

However
, even if everyone had access to the technology and the opportunity to work from home, it is
unrealistic to think that everyone would want to. Even though the technology for working, studying or
shopping on-line makes this option a possibility, nevertheless it would mean people had less freedom of
choice and less social contact in their lives. This would have a large impact on society as a whole.
So, in conclusion, I think that while this practice could rece the traffic problems in our cities, it is most
unlikely to be an acceptable solution. In terms of other solutions, perhaps we need to think more carefully
about facilitating public transport and limiting private cars in our city centres. The development of public
transport that is not road-based, such as sky trains or subways, would probably be a more acceptable
alternative measure to rece jams on our roads.
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首位雅思作文滿分的學生感言

西安市慶安中學高中二年級的陳晨，一個
17
歲的小女孩，喜歡書法、愛練太極、打乒乓球，像別的女孩子
一樣愛漂亮。但不同的是，
05
年
2
月，國際英語雅思考試
(IELTS)
的考場上，這個來自西安市慶安中學高中
二年級的女孩，僅用了
40
分鍾，以一篇漂亮的作文得到了雅思歷次考試有史以來全國首個作文滿分

近日
獲得新東方教育科技集團首次頒發的高分特等獎。

同時，她的聽說讀寫綜合成績為
7.5
分。看到這個成績，
陳晨自己也感到非常意外。

從開始上雅思輔導，到參加考試，她一共才用了一個多月的准備時間。而這一個多月的背後則是長達數年
的不斷堅持。

興趣就是最好的老師

說起自己當初學英語，陳晨笑言，這是一個美麗的意外。正經開始學英語應該是從初中開始。但初一
的時候，她並不喜歡英語。因為當時她的英語口語特別不好，加上這種學習是和考試掛鉤的，功課的壓力，
讓她很難對這門難學的功課產生好感。但到了初二，這種局面就完全轉變了。初二的時候，陳晨班裡來了
一位外教。他的課堂內容幾乎是全英語教學。但陳晨非但沒有發怵，反而通過這位外教老師活潑輕松的課
堂教學慢慢喜歡上了這門不久前還毫不
「
感冒
」
的課程。直到現在想起來，陳晨還一直感激這位引領她踏上
英語學習之路的老師。

⑻ 求雅思英語作文

If you wanna talk about playground legends, the conversation begins right there. Demetrius "Hook" Mitchell is the legend. You can hear all the stories in the world, but you'll never believe it until you see it. He's done inhuman stuff, unreal stuff.

was by far the best player to come out of Oakland. Demetrius Hook Mitchell is the Bay's most notorious legend. Every cat with at least minimal knowledge of playground ball has a Hook Mitchell story. The tales of his leaping ability are common place. Jumping over cars, bikes and people wasn't no thing to Hook. Before his descent into narcotics hell, Hook was nothing but heavenly. If he'd just kept his head straight, he'd be in the league right now, dominating.

Unfortunately, Hook lives in a prison cell now and in other folks' memories.

Several NBA stars who also grew up in Oakland, including Gary Payton, Jason Kidd, Antonio Davis, Drew Gooden, and Brian Shaw, all of whom played with Mitchell on the streets, and were astonished by his skills, but were unable to help him avoid his sorry fate. They describe his unstable home life and the longing for community that drove him to the streets. Mitchell himself is shown playing prison league games, and is surprisingly still able to play above the rim.

His story, like others, was written on courts between the West and East Bay.