雅思英語作文家庭生活
① 雅思英語作文,窮孩子和富孩子哪個能夠更好的面對成人
回望來時的路,發現有太多的驚喜,太多的歡笑,太多的哭泣。。。。。。但我們卻在這途中不斷進步,不斷成長!那時還略有些童稚的我,來到了這個班集體,成為你們其中的一員。我在這與你們一同學習,一同玩耍,一同說笑,一同成長。。。。。。記得那次突如其來的考試,完全把我嚇壞了,因為平時都不認真復習,我也知道臨時報不了佛腳,為此在那次考試中,我完全「慘敗。」 在老師發試卷發下來時,看見你們個個拿到試卷時的欣喜和滿足時,我低下頭了,我很後悔自己的不自覺,不用功。放學後,我一個人行走在回家的路上,也許是你們看出了我的低落,然後一個個追了上來,不停的安慰我。你們說的那一句話讓我徹底的醒悟了:「我們現在的努力,是因為希望在未來的某一天回望來時的路時,我們可以不枉青春,可以更好的前進!」 也許就是因為這句話,也許就是因為那段路上你們的陪伴,在我邁入家門的那一刻起,我開始改變了!我放下了原來一進家門就打開的電腦,我放下了原來一進廚房就拿起的水果。而是選擇打開書包,拿起筆,開始了改變的旅程。現在的我終於可以不用為某一次突如其來的考試所擔憂,而是坦然面對。每每當我又再次遇到困難時,想要放棄的時候,我總會想起那段路上你們說過的話,我就會重燃鬥志,重獲信心!那段小路上,走著三位正在追夢的少年,他們正努力改變自己的未來,正努力追尋自己的夢想,他們不言放棄。。。。。。只因希望在未來回望來時的路時,我們可以不枉青春,更好的前行,不留遺憾!
② 雅思寫作:當今社會,老年人生活比以前容易嗎
雅思寫作題目:
Some people think getting old is entirely bad. However, others think that life of the elderly in modern world is much easier than in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
雅思寫作解析:
2016 年雅思收官之戰的作文來了一道新題,問當今社會老年人的生活是不是很糟糕?說是新題,因為本題以前從未原題出現過,但關於年齡的話題卻不缺少。比如 2010 年 7 月 10 日「年輕人是否適合擔任政府要職」,2012 年 3 月 10 日「老齡化現象的原因及解決方法」,2012 年3 月31 日「年輕人和老年人誰的價值更高?」, 2013 年 6 月 8 日「政府是否應該對老年人養老提供財政支持?」, 2015 年 1 月 1 日「年輕人當領導,行不行?」,2015 年 4 月 11 日「老年人與年輕人爭奪工作職位,怎麼辦?」等等。
本題需要論證的對立觀點是:年老很糟糕 vs. 當今社會年老沒有那麼糟糕。那麼,變老有哪些壞處呢?首先,當然是身體條件沒有以前好了,甚至可能出現多種疾病(物質層面);其次,不工作了,與人的聯系少了,心裡可能會感覺孤單,甚至感覺沒有價值了(精神層面);最後,變老後對社會的依賴程度更高,給社會增加了壓力(社會層面)。那麼,這些問題在當今社會是不是得到了解決呢?首先,醫療條件的改善有助於保持老年人的身體狀況;互聯網的出
現有助於緩解老年人的心理孤單問題;物質水平的提高也降低了老年人給社會造成的壓力。如此觀之,現代社會老年人的生活的確容易多了,但我的觀點是:外部條件只是改善老年人生活的一個方面,最重要的還是老年人自己要積極調整心態,努力適應退休後的生活,從而過一個更幸福更祥和的晚年。
高分範文及筆記:
Getting old is a natural process that nobody really likes. When you reach a certain age, your physical conditions will inevitably deteriorate, and you may suffer from various kinds of diseases. When you retire, you will feel isolated because your previous work contacts may be all gone, then you may feel useless to the world. Furthermore, when you get too old, you'll have to rely heavily on the support from others, either physically or emotionally, and your life will become a great pressure to your family and the whole society as well.
(1)本次作文,老師在第一段提出雙方觀點,而是直接進入正題,從三個方面對第一個觀點進行論述:即,getting old is entirely bad. 其實,雅思作文本來就沒有什麼套路,套路只是為了規范你的思想,不至於混亂,但只要你能保持邏輯,不按套路也並非不可以。
(2)deteriorate 惡化 (=become worse; worsen)
(3)isolated 被隔離的;孤獨的 (=lonely)
For all these bad things about getting old, many people argue that the life of the elderly today is much easier than in the past. In the first place, medical advances nowadays have made it possible for the old people to stay sound and healthy for quite a long while
even after they retire. Diseases such as diabetes, hypertension and heart attack which might have inflicted pain on the old people are no longer serious problems for them. Then, with the widespread use of modern communication technology, old people today are no longer isolated from the world. Instead, by using their personal social media, they can always stay in touch with their families and friends, and share with them whatever they find interesting in their life. In this way, they do not really feel lonely or abandoned. Finally, the improved social wealth and pension system have also significantly reced the pressure the old people pose to their families and communities.
(1)本段論述為什麼老年人在當今社會生活會變得容易一些,分別針對第一段中的三個問題進行論述:醫學技術發展改善身體;通訊工具解決孤獨問題;社會財富和養老金制度降低生活壓力。
(2)for all... 盡管(= in spite of)
(3)diabetes 糖尿病
(4)hypertension 高血壓
(5)inflict...on... 使某人遭受 ......
(6)abandon 遺棄
So, I do agree that the old people today are enjoying a much more comfortable life than, say, thirty years ago (not to mention 100). That is why, instead of being worried about their retired life, many people even begin to expect their retirement to come, because they see this as a new beginning of their life. I think, as long as the old people have the right attitude, the modern world has indeed much to offer for their happy, enjoyable and rewarding retired life.
(1)本段寫自己的觀點。烤鴨注意如何在結尾段總結前文觀點,
同時對前文進行一定程度的深化和延伸。同時,請注意如何進行句式變化的。
(2)as long as 只要
(3)have much to offer for... 為 ...... 提供很多條件
(4)rewarding 值得的
③ 雅思寫作部分考什麼
雅思寫來作凡是達到了6分以上就自屬於很好了,下面小編介紹下,擁有什麼樣的能力就能夠寫好雅思寫作。
雅思寫作9分:
此分數語句華麗,行文就好比是吟詩作畫,筆下冉冉生輝,並且文章觀點別具匠心,讓人讀了之後悵然舒爽或義憤填膺、栩栩如生或者是回味無窮,其實對於這個分數很多native都寫不出來。
雅思寫作8分:
上海環球雅思班老師認為8分的高手必定是論點新穎、別具格,或者是文風富個性的,並且與眾不同。能夠讓人留下種深刻的印象。其他的標准同6分的話其實就是8分了。或者是論點般,但是裡面十分切題。語言很漂亮往往達到令人印象深刻的效果。
雅思寫作7分:
文筆流暢,錯誤少,裡面有個別閃光點就是7分。
雅思寫作6分:
文章切題,語句通順,裡面並沒有明顯錯誤,裡面會有些比較不錯的語句(復雜句、排比、倒裝、從句等等)就是6分的標准了。
以上語言對於雅思寫作各種分數的表達,都是使用的褒義詞,對這種能力的認可,由於可見這些就是雅思寫作的表現了,能夠達到這些分數的都是高手,越往上越是屬於精英。小編覺得寫作達到這些要求,肯定是不易的,因此望想要提升寫作能力的烤鴨,提升自己的寫作能力。
④ 雅思寫作 人為什麼愛找家族史
個人+直接原因:好奇心,有趣的探索(curiosity;a vivid and exciting exploration;);尋找家庭名人,為了出名(for fame);了解祖先的生活方式;(acknowledge about their ancestors' lifestyles);發揚傳統價值觀念(;promote emotional exchange; honor their heritage, enhance traditional value)
社會+根本原因:社會變遷(social change);人口頻繁搬遷(frequent relocation) ;生活方式與家族祖先的生活方式差異明顯(disparity in life style);信息發達與信息獲得的便利促使(informative, convenient to get information)
增長見識,更好認知世界(broaden one』s horizon, and get to know the outside world)
豐富情感經歷、傳承優良傳統(enrich emotional experience,carry forward the excellent customs)
促進文化交流(increase the regional, national and international cultural communication)
⑤ 求雅思英語作文
If you wanna talk about playground legends, the conversation begins right there. Demetrius "Hook" Mitchell is the legend. You can hear all the stories in the world, but you'll never believe it until you see it. He's done inhuman stuff, unreal stuff.
was by far the best player to come out of Oakland. Demetrius Hook Mitchell is the Bay's most notorious legend. Every cat with at least minimal knowledge of playground ball has a Hook Mitchell story. The tales of his leaping ability are common place. Jumping over cars, bikes and people wasn't no thing to Hook. Before his descent into narcotics hell, Hook was nothing but heavenly. If he'd just kept his head straight, he'd be in the league right now, dominating.
Unfortunately, Hook lives in a prison cell now and in other folks' memories.
Several NBA stars who also grew up in Oakland, including Gary Payton, Jason Kidd, Antonio Davis, Drew Gooden, and Brian Shaw, all of whom played with Mitchell on the streets, and were astonished by his skills, but were unable to help him avoid his sorry fate. They describe his unstable home life and the longing for community that drove him to the streets. Mitchell himself is shown playing prison league games, and is surprisingly still able to play above the rim.
His story, like others, was written on courts between the West and East Bay.
⑥ 雅思寫作高分範文:孩子成年後應該和父母住一起嗎
雅思寫作高分範文:孩子成年後應該和父母住一起嗎
Topic
Some people say that older people should live with their alt children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice.
TEXT(257 Words)
One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their alt children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.
Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.
Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.
Last but not the least, alt children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the alt children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their alt children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other.
⑦ 和三十年前,我們現在生活更幸福么英語作文雅思
隨著一片片黃葉的飄落,秋天來了。
秋天是一個秋高氣爽的季節,白天晴空萬里,夜晚繁星點點,讓人有一種心曠神怡的感覺。
秋天是一個落葉的季節,秋姑娘為大地換了新裝。河岸邊的樹木,隨著一陣陣秋風吹來,樹上枯黃的樹葉像黃蝴蝶一樣,慢慢地飄落下來。地上的黃葉越積越多,就像一條金色的地毯。只有遠處的楓樹林,楓葉像一團團火焰掛在樹上。遠遠望去,就像一棵棵「火焰樹」。
秋天是一個收獲的季節,在農田裡,金黃的稻子迎著秋風湧起了金色的波浪,高粱舉起了燃燒的火把。果園里,梨樹掛起金黃的燈籠,蘋果露出紅紅的臉頰。
「誰使秋天這樣美麗?」看!藍天上的大雁做出了回答,它們排成一個大大的「人」字,好像在說——勤勞的人們畫出秋天的圖畫。