網路監管英語雅思大作文

Ⅰ 都是圖表作文，考研英語2的大作文和雅思作文的難度相差大么

英語二的圖表題跟雅思有一個不一樣的地方
雅思圖表題不要求寫出自己的觀點，內但是容英語二的圖表題要求寫出自己的觀點
對於圖表描述方面，英語二要求比雅思低一些
我當初是考雅思底子考的英語二，不知道作文多少，反正英語合格了

Ⅱ 網路監管和個人行為英語作文

there is no need to argue about it. freedom of speech is evil and censorship is needed, and that's it. why? because we should maintain the stability of the regime, and the rule of the party, so that those rulling families can continue to get benefits from the system and the people :)

Ⅲ 求大神解答，英語雅思大作文啊啊

The choice of single or several careers
What is known to us all that to have several careers or ways of earning money will be a new fashion. Opinions vary from person to person.
However I had to admit that it's a new fashion indeed. There's no need to drift with the current in the meantime. That's to say, the styles of making money are various: having a single career, or having several careers. The choose is up to yourself or your character even personal preference.
It seems to me that the person who was concentrated and modest is suitable for having a single career. He will be a nine-to-fiver. Maybe he just need a decent job and just because of the stability and satisfaction. But we're also clear that most of them are quite low in creative proctivity. This is in contrast to who choose the various ways to obtain employment. They always hunt for creative work to realize the value of life even to make choice to have several careers. Most dreams to display their talent and gain a sense of self-gratification. So no matter what happen to them is all possible. They also have a common characteristics which set a stage for their career is that they never stop trying and never give up.
As far as I'm concerned, I prefer to have a single career to realize my dream. My personality are more conservative and never do things by halves. So if I picked a career I will hold on to the last just like I choose a life partner. However, no matter you choose to a single career or several careers ,just keep holding on and you will be sucessful!

Ⅳ 雅思大作文範文：網路時代老師還重要嗎

互聯網+課程，不僅僅產生網路課程，更重要的是它讓整個學校課程，從組織結構到基本內容都發生了巨大變化。正是因為具有海量資源的互聯網的存在，才使得中小學各學科課程內容全面拓展與更新，適合中小學生的諸多前沿知識能夠及時地進入課堂，成為學生的精神套餐，課程內容藝術化、生活化也變成現實。
互聯網+教學，形成了網路教學平台、網路教學系統、網路教學資源、網路教學軟體、網路教學視頻等諸多全新的概念，由此，不但幫助教師樹立了先進的教學理念，改變了課堂教學手段，大大提升了教學素養，而且，更令人興奮的是傳統的教學組織形式也發生了革命性的變化。正是因為互聯網技術的發展，以先學後教為特徵的「翻轉課堂」才真正成為現實。同時，教學中的師生互動不再流於形式，通過互聯網，完全突破了課堂上的時空限制。學生幾乎可以隨時隨地隨心地與同伴溝通，與老師交流。在互聯網天地中，教師的主導作用達到了最高限度，教師通過移動終端，能即時地給予學生點撥指導，同時，教師不再居高臨下地灌輸知識，更多的是提供資源的鏈接，實施興趣的激發，進行思維的引領。
互聯網+學習，創造了如今十分紅火的移動學習，但它絕對不僅僅是作為簡單的即時隨地可學習的一種方式而存在的概念，它代表的是學生學習觀念與行為方式的轉變。通過互聯網，學生學習的主觀能動性得以強化，他們在互聯網世界中尋找到學習的需求與價值，尋找到不需要死記硬背的高效學習方式，尋找到可以解開他諸多學習疑惑的答案。當互聯網技術成為學生手中的利器，學生才能真正確立主體地位，擺脫學習的被動感，自主學習才能從口號變為實際行動。互聯網+學習，對於教師的影響同樣是巨大的，教師遠程培訓的興起完全基於互聯網技術的發展，而教師終身學習的理念也在互聯網世界裡變得現實，對於多數使用互聯網的教師來說，他十分清楚自己曾經擁有的知識，是以這樣的速度在銳減老化，也真正懂得「弟子不必不如師，師不必賢於弟子」的道理。互聯網不但改變著教師的教學態度和技能，同樣也改變了教師的學習態度和方法。他不再以教師的權威俯視學生，而是真正蹲下身子與學生對話，成為學生的合作夥伴與他們共同進行探究式學習。
互聯網+評價，這就是另一個熱詞「網評」，在教育領域里，網評已經成為現代教育教學管理工作的重要手段。學生通過網路平台，給教師的教育教學打分，教師通過網路途徑給教育行政部門及領導打分，而行政機構也通過網路大數據對不同的學校、教師的教育教學活動及時進行相應的評價與監控，確保每個學校、教師都能獲得良性發展。換句話說，在「互聯網+」時代，教育領域里的每個人都是評價的主體也是評價的對象，而社會各階層也將更容易通過網路介入對教育的評價。此外，互聯網+評價改變的不僅僅是上述評價的方式，更大的變化還有評價的內容或標准。例如傳統教育教學體制下，教師的教育教學水平基本由學生的成績來體現，而在「互聯網+」時代，教師的信息組織與整合、教師教育教學研究成果的轉化、教師積累的經驗通過互聯網獲得共享的程度等等，都將成為教師考評的重要指標。

Ⅳ 雅思+大作文（通訊類）+求高手評分

第一段：
1，daily名詞的意思是日報。如果用做日常生活要寫daily life.
2, telephone is undoubtedly the most successful one....語序失當，應為，undoubtedly，telephone is the most....
3, Our human beings沒有這么用的， 什麼叫我們人類。。。。改為 our community更合適。
4，Since everything has two sides, it also causessome troubles. 這句話純粹中式英語，建議重寫
5，Personally speaking太低端，改為 from my perspective，或者 In my opinion
6， I think 和 （Personally speaking）語義重復，刪掉其中一個，或者直接說 I Suppose，不要用 think，太俗
第二段：
1， A large number of people太低級，初中用法。改為 a majority 更好
2， be addictive to 後面跟名詞是沒錯，但是use顯得多餘而且冗長，直接跟smartphone就好，telephone這個詞兒太老掉牙了
3，contact本身就是名詞不用keep contacting，而且這句話和上半句顯然是解釋和遞進關系而不是並列關系，你放個and做連詞肯定是邏輯錯誤。用 to be more specific更恰當。
4，As a result太生硬，直接用consequently 或者 in consequence就好
5，什麼叫their precious time is wasted？純中式英語要重寫
6， itestablishes gaps between people也是中式英語，可以改成，it has the side effect to strengthen family ties. 你太多相當然的中式英語了真的要扭過來不然沒法提高
第三段
1， Though some disadvantages are there aboutthe telephone，這句話沒意義。你想表示轉折的方法很多，比如however，On the other hand，完全沒必要堆字數寫這么一句奇奇怪怪的話上去。
2， the telephone still has many ....這句話的冠詞有問題，你是想表達手機有好處，那麼應該是 telephones still have...建議你好好看一下 the a an 和復數的用法
3，In one hand，而不是 on one hand
4，it will be convenient， 沒必要將來時，一般現在時即可，
5，it will be convenient for us and save time for us on the conditionthat it was used properly。這句話的含義我看不懂. 我知道你要表達的意思，建議你改寫成：Large amounts of time and energy can be saved if certain applications of smartphones could be used by people in right way.
6, Within just a few seconds, we can ....雅思寫作不但不建議用 I， you， 連we都要盡力避免，是因為正規的學術寫作不允許這個。建議用形式主語代替，比如 it is easy to have a talk with....
7， just by dialing the correct number, correct 實在是多餘，dialing a number即可
8，致命的錯誤！！！！On the other hand 一定是表示轉折，談論的是與你上篇相反的論點，而不是你現在的用法表示並列！！！！建議改成Additionally,
9, it can express our inner thoughts clearly through thetelephone. 改為 Smartphone can be used to express our inner thoughts clearly.....這個沒必要用形式主語
10， Also, we can even be closer to each other via telephone communication.純中式思想。。。建議改寫。。。
11， We要避免 We just use the telephone to communicate with a remote friend frequently.這句話just加的好詭異，建議改成These are the dominate reasons for people to communicate their friends by smartphone frequently.
第四段
1，結尾太快，沒有總結上文內容，這樣的話段落完整分基本丟光了，重寫吧騷年，至少重新總結一下正反雙方觀點。

我是一名海外在讀博士生，已經留學四年，自認為英語還不錯。你這篇文章我的評分是：4.5分
騷年還需努力啊，你離6還差距不小，詞彙量和語法都太過單薄了，而且中式思維相當嚴重

Ⅵ 求一篇英語雅思大作文。關於學生學習國際新聞同意或不同意的作文。分四段。200詞以上

Children in secondary school study international news as a subject, but some think that』s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today watching news, a means of learning what is happening around the world, has become a way of life to many people. When the value of news is undisputed, an issue of debate is whether it is necessary to include international news as part of school curriculum. I am of the opinion that it will be an enheartening/exciting change.

Ⅶ 求一篇英語雅思作文

一、雅思大作文開頭：
開頭要短小;要有立場和觀點;避免模板。
如： the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?
Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not.
Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society.
As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons.
Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.
二、雅思大作文結構：
一個paragraph一個idea;避免過多examples, esp personal examples.;段落間的平衡
三、雅思大作文語言：
避免idioms, famous sayings
避免poetic language
Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way
Use 「a mix of longer and short sentences」
以上從開頭、結構、語言等三個方面對雅思大作文的寫作技巧進行了簡單的總結，建議考生們可以根據以上建議，並通過針對性的練習來逐步掌握雅思大作文的寫作技巧，從而在雅思作文考試中取得更好的成績。

Ⅷ 英語雅思大作文求提綱

雅思大作文的提綱可以去新通外語上看看詢問一下，還有範文可以作參考。