雅思投訴類英語作文
A. 小弟最近考試遇到一些小麻煩,是關於一篇雅思類型的英語作文,字數150 不知從何入手。請各位前輩幫忙。
可以先誇一下澳大利亞,再誇一下RMIT。再解釋一下自己出國以後好好學習的決心,然後收尾即可。
B. 雅思英語作文問題
故事是這樣的
以前在各大學校里都流傳著這么一個恐怖故事
說是A校有不幹凈的東西 每當十五的時候 學校門口的魯迅像的眼睛就會動
所有教學樓都會停電
樓梯會從原來的13階變成14階
實驗室的水龍頭放出來的水會變成紅色
還有1樓盡頭的那個廁所只要有人進去了就再也出不來了
於是 一群不信邪的孩子們約好15那天去探險
晚上12點 他們准時來到了那所學校的門口
魯迅像的眼睛望著左邊 他們記下了 生怕出來的時候記不得有沒有動過
他們來到了教室 打開開關 咦 不是亮著的么?
「騙人。」一個男孩發出抱怨
「再看看吧。」
來到了樓梯口 「1 2 3...13沒錯阿 是13階阿?」
孩子們有點懷疑傳說的真實性了
於是他們又來到了實驗室 水龍頭打開了 白花花的水流了出來
「真沒勁阿 我們白來了!」
剛開始的刺激感都消去了一半。
最後 他們來到了那個廁所
女孩子雖然口上說不相信 可是還是不敢進去
於是讓剛剛很拽地說不怕的小C進去
看了表 1點整
2分鍾後 男生出來了
「切 都是騙人的」
孩子們不歡而散。
出門時 一個看門人發現了他們 喝斥他們怎麼可以那麼晚還在學校逗留。孩子們撒腿就跑
小B特地注意了一下門口的石像 沒錯 眼睛還是朝左看得
「騙人的」他嘀咕了一聲
「喂 小B么?小C昨天晚上和你們一起出去玩 怎麼還沒回來?」第二天早上 小C的媽媽打電話過來詢問。
小C也沒有去學校上課
孩子們隱約感到不對了
於是 他們將晚上的探險之事告訴了老師和家長
大家在大人的陪同下回到了那個學校。
「什麼? 我們的魯迅像的眼睛一直是朝右看的阿。」校長聽了孩子們的敘述 不可思議的說。
「可是我們昨天來的時候是朝左看的阿」
出門一看 果然 是朝右看得...
「可是昨天的確有電阿」
「昨天我們這里全區停電...你們怎麼開得燈?」
「還有樓梯!」孩子們迅速跑到樓梯口
「1 2 3...12?」
「我們的樓梯一直是12階的。」
「不可能!!!」
「還有實驗室」一個孩子提醒道
「對 實驗室」
一行人來到實驗室 就在昨天他們開過的那個水龍頭下 有一攤暗紅色的痕跡。
「是血跡。」
「那...小C昨天還去過那個廁所...」大家都感到了一陣莫名的恐懼
「走 我們去看看」校長也意識到了事情的嚴重性
...
推開門...
小C的屍體赫然出現在大家的眼前
因為驚恐而睜大的雙眼
被割斷的喉管血淋淋的
內臟散落在已經幹掉的水池裡...
「阿...」小C的媽媽當場昏了過去
幾個老師馬上沖出去嘔吐...
小B也被嚇得目瞪口呆
在他暈過去的前一秒鍾
他瞥見小C的手錶
指針停在了1點...
就是小C進去的那個時候...
順便說一下 他們去探險的那天晚上 並沒有門衛...
將此貼轉向5個以上的論壇不會魔鬼纏身且能實現一個願望 。
不回帖者晚上凌晨過後往往......
對不起,我很不情願,但是......請各位原諒!
C. 雅思考試投訴理由
雅思G類考生較少,所以對於G類的教材也比較少。在雅思G類小作文中,投訴信一直是常考話題,但是G類小作文投訴信可以從以下幾個思路去發展:
一、投訴理由:服務不周
(一) 自我介紹,表明投訴內容以及與收信人的相關性。
(二) 陳述投訴內容,如時間、地點、人物、事件等,並指出對方服務問題所在以及由此而產生的對自己或者家人的影響。
(三) 提出整改建議或者希望得到對方的賠償或補償。
結合真題來分析一下: You just returned from a tour. However, you were dissatisfied with the service you received from the travel agency. Write a letter to the manager of the agency. In your letter,
1. give the details of your tour
2. explain why you were unhappy with the service
3. say what you want the company do for you
題目並無指明具體投訴內容,因此考生選擇餘地較大,一般來說,建議考生可以考慮旅行社安排的住所不好,比如房間臟等。具體寫法如下:
The room was not cleaned on a daily basis and that my bed was made up only every three days.
還可以說房間沒有熱水,比如: The hot water was only supplied from 6:00 am to 10:00 pm, which means if I arrived back at the hotel late, it was impossible for me to take a shower with hot water.
二、投訴理由:質量低劣
(一)表明投訴原因以及與收信人的相關性。
(二)陳述投訴內容,如購買的時間、地點、人物等,並指出產品具體問題所在以及由此而產生的後果。
(三)希望得到對方的賠償或補償。
結合真題來分析一下: You have recently made a purchase from a department store in another town but found some problems with it after you returned home. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter,
1. say what proct you have bought
2. explain the problems
3. say what you would like them to do
題目並無指明具體產品,因此考生選擇餘地較大,一般來說,考生可以考慮服裝。關於服裝的投訴點,一般可以說新買的衣服褪色問題嚴重,品質有問題。
具體寫法如下: The color of the sweater faded heavily and even dyed other clothes.
還可以說標簽和配件丟失,比如: I put on the shirt that day when I returned home and found the buttons on the left sleeve were missing. Also, I couldn』t find the label of the shirt, so I was unable to know the proper way of washing or hanging it.
建議:考生可以在寫投訴信的時候,參考上處的兩個理由,以此作為切入點,這些理由可以被認為是「百搭理由」,適合套用在任何投訴信件中。
D. 您好,我想請問下您。我是英語本科畢業,畢業三年了,雅思6.5,口語才5.5.
有幾個問題沒弄明白。一,你說考教師資格證是澳洲的還是中國的?這兩個完全不回一樣答,標准什麼都不同。二,你去澳洲讀幼教碩士,目的是什麼,是回中國發展做幼教,還是留在當地幼教,這兩個也是完全不同的路線。三,雅思口語8.5分是一個很恐怖的分數,相當於母語國家水平的人的程度,一般口語6分,6.5分都算很不錯了,好點的大學也就要求7分吧。
關於給你的我個人的建議,不管你是讀碩士也好,讀TAFE課程也罷,都涉及到語言關的通過。你本身是英專的,應該知道英語這門語言的基本結構,框架,還有如何學英語。但是你雅思成績不理想和你是英專否,畢業三年否都沒關系,只和你有沒有認真准備雅思考試,了解這門考試技巧這些有關系。踏踏實實的靜心下來准備雅思,以你的基礎,考7分一點都不難。至於口語5.5可能比較差,找找是什麼原因,發音?詞彙?流利度不夠?針對性練習!
加油,有任何問題歡迎交流,我本人也在備考雅思中,今年9月考!
E. 求一篇雅思的英語作文
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government』s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials』 sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.
這是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文範文,相信對你有用,你也可以去看看其它的範文。
F. 雅思作文投訴信怎麼寫
雅思寫作投訴信寫法講解
開頭:Complaint –說明意圖+解釋情況+解決方案
1. I am writing to complain about…/that…
2. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something
3. I am most reluctant to complain, but…
4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a complaint about…
Examples:
I am writing to complain about the service on the Beijing-Shanghai train which I took on August 16, 2001.
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the Walkman I bought at the ty-free shop in your airport on February 14, 2005.
End of a complaint letter
1. I would be grateful / I shall appreciate it very much if you could take the matter into consideration and solve it at your earliest convenience.
2. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of…/ within 14 days.
雅思寫作投訴信範文
Writing task 1
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate』s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my students, and I am falling behind in my assignments.
G. 求批改英語作文(IELTS)
Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?
Should men and women be equal? This is a much talked about question nowadays. In fact, sex is always a barrier for a woman to achieve their success in her career. I firmly believe that women should be given the same right as men, because they are equally important in all human activities.
First of all, with the rapidly development of society and economy, there have emerged many working opportunities and women are certainly as intelligent as men if they have a same ecation. Therefore, some high-level jobs are more occupied by women than the past. As this result, it proved that women have the same abilities as men. Personally, it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the abilities of men and women and it should be according to indivial abilities and not focus on the gender.
Secondly, the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Not all women are bad at business, just as not all men are poor interpersonal communicators. For example, if men are often calm and thoughtfully, but some men are more careless and hesitant than women? Beside, if women are always sensitive, then what would you say when they are insensitive in work or interpersonal. Obviously, there are no absolute advantages when considering their gender.
In conclusion, as a man, I would hopefully see that more outstanding women can be working their favourite jobs and can get their desirable position. Because a person』 indivial ability is far more important than their gender.
H. 什麼樣的類型的雅思口語考官應該被投訴
1.工作不到位,讓你在門口等了很久的考官,正常規定考官也是要迎接考生的。
2.面癱臉甚至有點不屑的,雖然考官可能聽了太多模板太累,但讓人感覺不重視雅思考試的考官還是值得投訴的。
3.不耐煩頻繁打斷你的回答的,造成你無法發揮出自己真實水平的。
I. 雅思培訓類的作文中的投訴信可以怎麼寫呢
在我看來,雅思的培訓類考試的小作文中的投訴信一直都是雅思官方考察的熱門內容。一般集中投訴在賓館,餐廳之類的地方。要想寫好這類作文,一般在結構上可以分為三部分:
一、首先要進行自我介紹,明確你的投訴對象和投訴理由??
二、詳細陳述原因,將自己不滿意對方的內容詳細的說出來,並指出他們的錯誤方面,即可能或已經對自己和朋友造成的影響。??
?三、對對方提出自己的要求u,比如建設建議等。