英語雅思高分作文範文

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this is a pie chart shows the peoportion of the meat sold in a supermarket.the total meat sold in the supermarket is classified in to six types as follows: chicken,pork,beer,lamb,fish and others.

Overall,chicken has the largest proportion ,which accounts for 40%;
while others has the smallest percentage ,at 2%

As can be see in the pie chart ,chicken,which makes up 40% ,is the most popular among the total meat sold, then next is ork with 20% ,followed by beef,constituting 18%; and finally come lamb,fish and others at 15%,5% and 2% respectively . It should be noted that the sale of pork is half as much as that of chicken. And it is also interesting to note theat the sale of chicken is 20 times as much as that of others.

It can be concluded from the pie chart that chicken is the most commonly bought meat while others is the least commonly bought meat
我覺得不要一直用一樣的格式，老師看了很多一樣的格式會很煩的，批起來就會扣多點 。
對立式觀點

1. 選擇一方觀點進行說明

給出兩個對立的事物或者一個事物對立的兩個方面，要求考生支持一方並進行說明。
具體表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people like A, others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B? Give specific reasons t to illustrate your answer.
在這個命題形式的摸版中有些大寫字母的含義如下：
A和B表示選擇的兩種觀點；
CHOOSE A和CHOOSE B表示對A，B的選擇；
DO C指題目中提及的某件事情，如：Some people prefer A in order to DO C.
請考生在實際寫作中根據題目天如他們各自所代表的內容。
MODEL (1)
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer①because I think A has more advantages.

There are numerous reasons why②, and I would like in here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that③. It can be given a concrete example④.

Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that⑤. Take the case of a thing that⑥.

One very strong argument for A is that⑦. This demonstrate the undeniable fact that⑧.

Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, ⑨.

But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than hose of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that⊙.
①表明自己的觀點；贊同
②填入贊同A的句子
③贊同A的第一個原因
④舉例說明原因一
⑤贊同A的第二個原因
⑥舉例說明原因二
⑦說明贊嘆A的第三個原因
⑧表明A的優勢
⑨列出B的1-2個優勢
⊙總結觀點
MODEL (2)
Some people believe A. These people point out the fact that①. However, other people believe B. They point out that②. They say that③. As far as I am concerned, my preference is for A.

The main reason why I prefer A is that④. We can see that⑤.

A more personal reason why I like A is⑥. As I member, ⑦.
A is superior in another way, that is ⑧ because that⑨.

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A, such as⊙. But these can be compensated by its advantages. So, in comparison with B, A is surely a clever choice.
①支持A的理由
②支持B的理由
③進一步闡述支持B的原因
④支持A的第一個原因
⑤舉例說明原因一
⑥支持A的第二個原因
⑦舉例說明原因二
⑧支持A的第三個原因
⑨舉例說明原因三
⊙列舉出A的劣勢
MODEL (3)
It is often difficult for people to decide whether to choose A or choose B. But for us students, the advantages of A always outweigh the disadvantages. Those who object A claim that①.

Although at first glance these arguments sound reasonable and appealing, they are not borne out by a careful consideration. ②

In addition, ③. As a result, ④.

Finally, the incomparable advantages of A is that ⑤.

From the above, I think A has a lot of advantages compared with B. So⑥.
①反對A的理由
②支持A的第一個原因並舉例說明
③支持A的第二個原因並舉例說明
④A的優勢
⑤支持A的第三個原因並舉例說明
⑥重申觀點

2. 比較不同觀點的優劣

給出兩個對立事物或一個事物對立的兩個方面，要求考生說明二者為什麼不同或比較它們的優缺點，並給出理由。
具體表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
MODEL (1)
A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don』t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.

Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.

However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.

In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.
①人們支持B的第一個原因
②進一步闡述支持B的第一個原因
③支持B的第二個原因
④支持A的第一個原因
⑤進一步闡述支持A的第一個原因
⑥舉例說明支持A的第一個原因
⑦支持A的第二個原因
⑧選擇A的第一個好處
⑨選擇A的第二個好處
MODEL (2)
Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.

For A, ③

But this also demonstrates that④

Moreover, ⑤

B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.

In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.
①人們的第一種觀點
②人們的第二種觀點
③A的一個優勢
④A所隱含的劣勢
⑤A的一個大缺點
⑥B的一個明顯優勢
⑦舉例說明B的優勢
⑧對我來講，B的第一個優勢
⑨對我來講，B的第二個優勢

以下是短文寫作中使用率最高、覆蓋面最廣的基本句式，每組句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根據自己的情況選擇其中的1－2個，做到能夠熟練正確地仿寫或套用。

1．表示原因

1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people』s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
註：如考生寫第一個句子沒有把握，可將其改寫成兩個句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for this．這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。

2．表示好處
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例如：
Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．

3．表示壞處
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmful to us．
例如：
However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television．

4．表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth．
2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
一、跳槽的原因及解決辦法

1.相關詞彙： Fierce competition heavy pressure job-hopping is looked upon to move upward quickly, keep skill fresh and up to date acclimatize themselves to the rapidly changing society

2.原因： (1)社會壓力大，人們的競爭意識增強，不斷改變以適應社會的變化

(2)處於個人發展的需要，尋求升職，更新知識

(3)金錢的誘惑，不在乎在哪兒工作，做什麼職業，只要掙錢多

(4)家庭原因，spouse工作地點改變或孩子去其他地方上學

3.解決方法：

(1)要理性看待，一般來說，stability equals success

(2)chronic job-hopper將被questioned integrity and loyalty ,not reliable

(3)政府和mass media應該鼓勵人們紮根一個地方，扎扎實實幹事業，並且盡可能提高welfare,改善城市和community的環境，留住人才

(4)公司應該提高工資待遇，給employee創造一個良好的工作環境，在保證企業利潤的同時要考慮員工個人發展，增加培訓，擴充員工的知識

二、大學是否應該根據就業教授學生知識，大學的主要功能是什麼

平衡寫：

1. 認為應該提供實際知識的：

(1)大學生畢業就要找工作，因此要培養學生掌握future job的技能

(2)有人甚至聲稱理論沒用，不是每個大學生都要做科學家

2. 反對方

(1) It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短淺理論知識非常重要，理論指導實踐，大學的職責不僅是教會學生一門技術，更重要的是教授一種方法

(2) 不學理論只學實際知識，會使學生變成utilitarian, narrow-minded, lack of imagination，如果學生要學的只是生存的技能，那就去vocational school

3. 總之，我認為大學的功能是versatile的，促進學生all-around development,培養學生具有creative mind in some special field,而不只是教授該領域的實際知識，可以通過一些part-time job來獲得。

三、個人不能對環境保護做不了什麼，同意不同意

This is just an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection

1. 分析環境惡化原因是缺乏環保意識

2. 給出解決辦法

四、維持博物館是否是浪費金錢？

1. 政府應該spend a lot of money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of different people.有的人認為是浪費錢，我認為是很有必要的。

2.博物館很重要(博物館的作用)

(1)illuminate the culture, history and arts of the world. 比如，世界上最大的British Museum provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts , collections in it trace the development of civilization throughout the history of mankind. Definitely a heartquake!

(2)shoulder the responsibility to preserve and carry forward a country』s traditional culture.

(2)serve as a significant mean of adolescent ecation, benefit both the present and future generation. 教育學生什麼是美，purify their heart，也可以作為第二課堂，提供教學參考

3.不是浪費金錢

(1)這種觀點是shortsighted，只是從個人的利益出發，政府應該站在一個更高的角度去看問題。對國家的經濟和人民生活是有很大促進作用的

(2)不同於其他產業，不能讓其自生自滅，否則可能很難生存

(3)花的錢多，個人沒有能力支付。

五、考試

1. Used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fail in a subject

2. 不能evaluate one』s true ability.只是測試memory or the skill of working rapidly under pressure.

高分does not mean possessing creativity in dealing various problems

3. Encourage bad study habits, emphasis on memorizing 考試內容 rather than to think。考試前非常用功，但是考試後forget all the information

4. lower the standards of teaching, deprive teachers of freedom. Teacher are judge by the examination results of students, 老師只顧教了考試技巧。

5. 考試是可以作為評判學生的一個依據，但是不能是唯一evaluation.

六、科技(電話，電腦)的利與弊

1. On the positive side,

(1) make life faster, easier and safer (2) the world is becoming smaller and closer, trains cars plains make possible to travel to distant places (3)modern communication tools,使人們更好的交流，與任何地方的人交流，特別使促進了business的發展(4)longer life expectancy由於progress of medical science (5)電影電視made life enjoyable and colorful (6)計算機和Internet get information easier, make friends, business, tele-ecation

2. On the negative side, (1)機器的使用造成unemployment(2)電話和互聯網的使用alienate people from their friends 因為lack adequate face-to-face communication. (3)Children 缺乏essential interpersonal skills.Those who inlge in … often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, they tend to be more introverted, self-centered and with drawn.

七、徹底禁止吸煙

1. 從經濟方面，contribute much to government revenue,如果baned ,則會導致unemployment

2. 從權利方面，Smoking just a hobby and amusement, 人們有權選擇自己的 lifestyle

3. 從健康方面，必須承認抽閑是detrimental to health,但是the harm is exaggerated.如果控制每天的吸煙量，不會對健康造成devastating problem. 而且還有relieve stress 和 calm down.歷史上有一些偉人吸煙，毛澤東，鄧小平，他們仍然enjoy long life expectancy.

八、老年人問題

1.take care by children 和in nursing homes 各有優缺點

2.在家的話，老人可以享受與家人交流的機會，這樣他們不會孤獨，而且還可以照顧小孩，而且他們的經驗對人們的事業和家庭生活都有幫助。但是由於老人經常會出現健康問題，因此需要花很多時間照料，影響人們的工作。

3. 在nursing home的話，可以有更多機會與their peers相處，common language and interest,而且現在的條件越來越好，得到專業的照顧及醫療服務，還有proper diet 對他們的健康有利。而且讓小孩有充分的時間工作，追求自己的事業。但是缺少與家人的交流，會使他們感到lonely，出現一些psychological problem而且如果將所有老人都放到rest home,將給政府增加財政負擔。

4. As neither the two solutions is effective enough to solve the problem of …, I favor the combination of the two.

九、如何對待罪犯

1.criminals 應該be locked up in prison(jails).

2. can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment for law-abiding citizens. Thieves ,robbers, rapists and murders are dangerous, pose potential threat to the society

3. 放到監獄教育是一個很好的方式，讓他們知道侵犯其他人的權利是要付出代價的，這樣就會減少他們再次犯罪的可能性

4.不但是punish criminals but also deters the potential criminals. 有些有犯罪傾向的人由於害怕被處罰，可能會放棄commit crime.

5.應該放到監獄。Just as the old saying goes, mercy to the criminal may be cruelty to the people.

十、古跡是否應該保留

1. Historic building is useful for studies. 每個階段都有不同的建築，反映當時的文化，研究他們可以理解evolution of society and culture. 社會發展是 continuously的，the later generation bases on and inherits from the former.因此,獲取這些是非常必要的。

2.Bring advantages of tourism.很多外國人和本國人都對古代文化很感興趣，因此保留古跡可以吸引很多遊客，bring much benefit to the country. 如果都是高樓大廈的話，在自己的城市也可以看到，誰還去旅遊。

3. 古代建築中也有一些我們值得學習的技術，不是所有技術都傳下來了，有些建築的奧秘現在人們還不是完全清楚。十一、動物保護(動物實驗)

1. 共同生活在一個地球上，應該保護動物，maltreatment to animals is barbaric and uncivilized practice. 但是說動物瀕臨滅絕是exaggerated，禁止動物實驗更是irrational

2. Select the superior and eliminate the inferior, the survival of the fittest 是一個natural rule can not be violated，有些specifies缺乏生存技能，就應該被淘汰，如果人們的過渡干預反而會造成壞的作用對ecological system.當然，如果是因為人類破壞了其habitat而導致的endanger,另當別論。

3. 動物實驗是indispensable for medical research, all of which 是為人類造福，沒有人不希望在全球范圍內消滅AIDS，而這一切需要大量的生物實驗來完成。而且目前還沒有有效的alternative methods,計算機還不足以模擬整個生物實驗，或許以後有替代方法了，就可以取消動物實驗。目前能做的只能是減小痛苦，relieve pain.

4. 有人說吃動物的肉很殘忍，讓大家都做vegetarian, 在我看來很可笑，動物有生命，植物就沒有生命了？這么說人類就該餓死starve to death 。因此，只要不是虐待動物，將他們作為食物和衣服 is not blameworthy.

5. 因此我不贊成… 【訪問中國雅思網www.cnielts.com獲取更多雅思考試資訊】

十二、青少年犯罪與Drug abuse

1. 原因：

(1)電視中的暴力與色情

(2)家庭原因：Increasing divorce rate, Brought up in a sole-parent family, 缺少父母的關愛,psychological problem, feel disoriented.

(3)學校原因：schools and society should be responsible在學校學習壓力大，就業壓力大

(4)自身原因：不成熟，sequacious，lack of self-control an self-discipline, can not resist the temptation of drugs and fall victims to drug dealers.

2. 解決方法：

(1)政府應該strict censorship should be imposed on 媒體中的不健康內容

(2)家長應該多關心

(3)政府和學校應該多教育，不能只顧academic performance

十三、學生評價老師

1. Drawbacks:

(1)學生還不夠成熟，他們往往從自身的經驗和利益出發來評價老師，因此unable to evaluate teachers』 performance in a sound way。可能會出現要求嚴格的老師不受歡迎的情況。

(2)學生評價老師也會對老師產生不好的影響，老師為了cater for the needs of children and get a high evaluation, 從而放鬆對學生的要求，而且對教學內容和教學效果也會有影響

2. Advantages:

(1)對學生來說，評價老師有利於培養學生think independently. 應該鼓勵學生challenge 老師，這樣他們不但學到知識，而且具有innovative思維，敢於超越老師。

(2)對老師來說，獲得feedback 也是提高自己教學能力和教學效果的有效途徑，也有利於培養老師的競爭意識，不斷學習，不斷完善自己來滿足學生的學習要求。

(3)學生交了學費，就是customer,老師提供教學服務，從這點上說，學生也有權評價老師。

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③ 近幾年雅思考試的高分範文

雅思考試如何的高分？

1、雅思大作文寫作需要注重寫好文章的框架
文章的framework即雅思寫作文章的結構永遠是決定一篇寫作是否達到要求的最重要的標准，即一篇文章好不好， 首先看的不是他的句型， 詞彙， 或是論點等。 而是段落之間的銜接一定要十分清楚，我們不能老是採用大三段的形式-開頭，經過，結尾。我們可以多用用連接詞，例如：first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等.另外可以多分自然段，給考官一目瞭然的感覺。

2. 雅思大作文寫作技巧中，句型的多樣化是非常重要的一個。

如果一篇文章，從頭到尾，永遠用的只有一種句型，那麼這篇文章一定拿不到高分，我們可以適當的改換一下句型。雅思大作文模板的句子比較通用，因此對學生句型的要求沒有那麼的高標准。

基本句型包括：Ⅰ.主謂句;Ⅱ. There be;Ⅲ. 主系表結構的句子;Ⅳ. 被動語態(我看到一張帖字說， 不要用被動， 我不這樣認為， 國外的文章， 用被動的也比比皆是。)

復雜句型包括：Ⅰ. 並列句;Ⅱ. 從句(定語，狀語，名詞性，非謂語)

3. 詞彙的Variety是雅思考試寫作技巧中最基礎的一個，也是最難掌握的一個。
說實話做到這點真的很難， 首先你要有龐大的詞彙量，第二你要用的恰當，不出錯誤。當然大家可以累計一些固定搭配的詞彙，例如：激烈的競爭 fierce competition等。

4. 多舉EXAMPLE(重要)雅思雅思大作文寫作技巧中的重要組成部分。
大家不要小看這點，對於寫作基礎不是很好的考生來說，這點是最重要的。一篇文章如果讓你從頭到尾都在講道理，根本沒有那麼多話要說。而且有時候還不一定說的清楚。那麼這時候你就用例子來表明你的觀點。另外考官也是很歡迎考生在雅思大作文寫作中舉例子的，因為這樣更具體。

④ 一個英語作文雅思的求一篇範文

可以從個人發展和社會發展角度去探討。
個人有權利追求更好的工作環境和待遇，以及在此專過程中自己水平的更屬大提升；
這些有技術的高層次人才在發達國家工作，有利於更好的發揮自己的特長，從而帶動全社會乃至全人類的發展和進步。
雅思還是要自己多寫多練啦~~

⑤ 雅思英語大作文11.08.25,求一篇6分左右的範文，謝謝

思寫作參考書，我選哪本 在雅思考試當中最讓人頭疼的可能就是寫作了，見過太多的從4.5到5.5掙扎很多次卻依然距離6分很遙遠的同學，惋惜之餘，也在想什麼原因導致了這些同學的悲催現狀呢。 輔導資料我們並不缺，市面上各種寫作指導不下30種。寫作理論體系也不缺，什麼單邊式，雙邊式，讓步式，不一而足。對於一個7分的文章應該是什 么樣，大家也是各說各的。雖然有我們有統一的評分標準的指導，但是什麼人的解讀最有效呢?聰明的同學已經猜到了，當然是雅思考官。考官的標准才是我們唯一 需要遵循的標准。而考官的標准去哪裡找呢?毫無疑問，答案在劍橋雅思真題的範文。 我們現在用的最多的復習資料就是劍橋雅思的真題。大作文寫作有一個明顯的特點，那就是雖然話題多樣，提問形式多變，但是常考的話題也就那麼幾個，從劍橋4-到劍橋8，包括A類和G類文章在內，共有30個題目，基本涉及到了過半數的雅思寫作話題了。對於小作文，常見的四種圖形--線圖，餅圖，柱圖，餅圖--以及兩種不常見的圖形--地圖和流程圖--每一種類型在劍橋真題當中都有所涉及。 因而，同學們再准備寫作的過程當中首先要做的就是要將劍橋真題當真的9分考官範文做到熟讀成誦，熟悉其寫作

⑥ 雅思英文作文（只需150字左右）。要求精闢，有深度。

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Who should be most responsible for children's ecation? Give your opinion and reasons for it. You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Sample Answer
It seems to me that there is a clear-cut answer to this question. Although in the early years of a child's life parents are the principal ecators, that role is soon assumed very largely by the child's teachers. Even elder brothers and sisters, who may give good advice, can never take the place of teachers in molding a child's mind.
First and foremost, teachers know best in terms of ecation. They are professional ecators, and as such they are better equipped with expertise in teaching. It is in schools, too, that children make friends and learn how to act in a socially responsible manner. Teachers know best how to organize, motivate and discipline their students. Furthermore, as children spend most of their time in schools, teachers have more influence on them than their parents do.
Parents, on the other hand, are mostly either too busy to spend time with their children, or are ignorant of the right way to ecate them. This is not to say that parents can shirk (refuse to take) their responsibility for ecating their children. Parenting is an important factor that shapes competency and character formation in children. Failure to take such responsibility constitutes delinquency as parents.
Nevertheless, given the professional qualifications of teachers and the time they spend with their students, it is clear that the overwhelming burden of ecating children falls upon the shoulders of teachers.

⑦ 求雅思大作文範文參考

那題目的觀點你是同意還是不同意先？我個人來講是不同意的，現在娛樂比以前多了，只是方專式不一樣而已。

第一屬段，擺觀點，不同意

第二段，不同意的原因123（娛樂只是為了放鬆，與creative無關，隨著科技的發展，娛樂變得多樣化，簡單化和生活化，擺點實例支持觀點，像online game, online chat, online reading，當然也有很多戶外活動）

第三段，讓步討論對方觀點，誠然科技發展也有其弊端，網路的發達使人寧可花更多時間在電腦面前而不是出去社交（科技發達的弊端有很多事例的，沉迷游戲不利於身心發展等等）

第四段，再次表達自己的觀點是不同意的，雖然有弊端，但是當今人們娛樂的選擇比以前多多了，大家有更多的選擇適合自己的方式去娛樂，而市場的需求反而讓新的娛樂more creative，所以說less creative 是不成立的。

第五段，總結