英語美文閱讀內容改版通知

1. 請幫忙修改+翻譯英語文章~

1.We make a deal that we meet on xx road.
2.on xx road.
3.we start the meaningful activity.
4.We enjoy the experence,ring which i gain a truth-it is-
In our life,we must do many meaningful things,which seems very
hard,but when you try your best to manage it,you will get great happy and satisfy.
水平不怎麼高 還湊合吧 呵呵
至於演講稿 如果是非正式場合 則不用太版長 太長反而不好 顯得權羅嗦

2. 修改英文文章

前兩句是很中國的用法，要改為：

Is the range of infectious diseases changing or enlarging? Is the change caused by global warming or other reasons? Scientists are still arguing on these topics. The predictions(prediction這個詞我覺得不太妥當) made in late 1990s said that the warming climate might be the cause that had caused the expansion of infectious diseases, while others said the report was too superficial. Scientist Lafferty said that disease carriers may move towards cold places for increased temperature(邏輯不通啊). Thus, hot places may survive（？？？）. However, others pointed out that the warming temperature does not cause this phenomenon. Although the range of infectious diseases is changing instead of enlarging, it may still bring bad influence over human beings, said Pascuel. As people love to move into crowded places, the changing of disease rang may have far-reaching influence on human beings . Scientist said that other factors may be the main reason of disease expanding(此句話很模糊，是什麼因素呢？). We should find more data to solve this problem.

I agree with the scientist who said that it is other factors (什麼？)rather than climate that may have a major role. With the fact that global warming is becoming a very hot topic these years, people tend to attribute all sufferings to climate changing. Scientists should spend more time on other factors in order to find the true cause.

Excuse me, but I want to ask a question,that is, is there any method to stop the expansion of infectious disease? I want to know how serious it is if the range of infectious disease enlarges?

3. 修改英語文章

My Dream Job
Expressing directly, I am going to be an outstanding scientist or mathematician in the future.
Some people may think that scientist or mathematician is a extremely boring job. That is why I am not understood. However, I don』 mind what they say.
I am really into math and science. I think the world was constructed by both of them. Needing to help myself, I want to know more about the secrets of the world. I also need other knowledge, but math and science are the most important.
In addition, I』m going to study the two subjects very hard. Therefore, I am studying the higher mathematics these days. After that, I am going to face to and solve some world math problems. And I am going to be the winner of some world math prizes.

4. 修改一段英語文章

I think I am a person with ability plus flexibility, for which I could apply and co-working well with a multi-cultural and diverse work force is not difficult for me.Having a stable personality and high sense of responsibility is desirable.Ambitious attitude is one of my features.Willing to assume responsibilities. I am thirsty for the great achievement.Being a happy and funny person, making others laugh is my hobby and I could handle the partnership with others.Good at dealing with personnel at all levels effectively.And what is the best about me is my ability to use Microsoft Office and typing at a fast speed. I hope that I can get a chance to serve the company.

5. 英語短篇美文（請大家往這里看！）

The beauty of the sunset【黃昏之美】

A Lifelong Career【學習：一生的事業】

heavy shoolwork【課業繁重】

Time【時間】

Work and Play【工作與娛樂】

My first Job【我的第一份工作】

My Favorite Sports【我最喜愛的運動】

6. 修改英語文章！~ 拜託

My family
My family is a big one with many members. My mother is an accountant,and she's close to me. Of course, she knows me a lot. And my father can be called fun-loving, he is a program-designer, who is always good at computer.
As for my grandmather, she is kind. She's old but good at thinking, and we communicate a lot. What's more,she is a very good cook as well as my grandfather.
My grandma likes reading books and grandpa thought of me as a very good child,but he died. I』 very sad about that.
In my family, I have six cousins, each of whom is frank to the others, making our family harmonous.
I love my family so much!

7. 怎麼寫英文期刊的文章修改稿的回信

開門見山說明來意就行。
Dear xxx:
Many thanks for the insightful comments and suggestions of the referees. I have made corresponding revision according to their advice. Words in blue are the changes I have made in the text（為了便於審稿人重審，一般把修改過的地內方用醒目顏色標容出）。
按照審稿人的意見逐條進行了修改
The following is the answers and revisions I have made in response to the reviewers' questions and suggestions on an item by item basis.
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8. 修改文章(英文)

More specifically, figure one illustrates the supply and demand curve for beers. As one can see, each price corresponds to different values for supply and demand, and the market equilibrium is reached at point E, at which the numerical value for supply equals that of demand. In other words, markets use data like these to find prices that will maximize both efficiency and profit while lowering the cost.

Also, according to the diagram, one can see that when the price of beer reaches 5￡, it exceeds the expected price, and since common people cannot afford such expensive beer, the demand will eventually drop down to zero, as no one will want to buy beer. On the other hand, when prices are down as low as 1￡, the demand for beer is so high that supply simply cannot meet demand, and sinks to a value of 0.

In conclusion, it can be seen that supply and demand depend on each other, and that a slight change in one value can lead to drastic changes in the other.

～ 如果要談 Supply 和 Demand，一般都是把 supply 放前面 "supply and demand."
～ 沒有 allocate efficiency 這種說法的。應該用 "Maximize efficiency"

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我幫你把句子的順序改了一下，把語法錯誤都改了。
然後我加了一些新的句子，去掉了一些不需要的句子。
最後加了一個小小的 Conclusion. 希望對你有幫助！

9. 英語美文閱讀

Right Beside You 身邊總有你

The passengers on the bus watched sympathetically as the young woman with the white cane made her way1 carefully up the steps. She paid the driver and then, using her hands to feel the location of the seats, settled in to one. She placed her briefcase on her lap and rested her cane against her leg.
It had been a year since Susan, thirty-four, became blind. As the result of a medical accident she was sightless, suddenly thrown into a world of darkness, anger, frustration and self-pity. All she had to cling to2 was her husband Mark.
Mark was an Air Force officer and he loved Susan with all his heart. When she first lost her sight, he watched her sink into despair and he became determined to use every means possible to help his wife.
Finally, Susan felt ready to return to her job, but how would she get there? She used to take the bus, but she was now too frightened to get around the city by herself. Mark volunteered to ride the bus with Susan each morning and evening until she got the hang of3 it. And that is exactly what happened.
For two weeks, Mark, military uniform and all, accompanied Susan to and from work each day. He taught her how to rely on her other senses, specifically her hearing, to determine where she was and how to adapt to4 her new environment. He helped her befriend the bus drivers who could watch out for her, and save her a seat.
Each morning they made the journey together, and Mark would take a taxi back to his office. Although that meant he had to travel through the city and the routine was costly and exhausting, Mark knew it was only a matter of① time before Susan would be able to ride the bus on her own. He believed in her.
Finally, Susan decided that she was ready to try the trip on her own. Monday morning arrived. Before she left, she embraced her husband tightly. Her eyes filled with tears of gratitude for his loyalty, his patience, and his love. She said good-bye and, for the first time, they went their separate ways. Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday... Each day on her own went perfectly, and a wild gaiety5 took hold of Susan. She was doing it! She was going to work all by herself!
On Friday morning, Susan took the bus to work as usual. As she was exiting the bus, the driver said, 「Miss, I sure envy you.」 Curious, Susan asked the driver why.
「You know, every morning for the past week, a fine looking gentleman in a military uniform has been standing across the corner watching you when you get off the bus. He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches you until you enter your office building. Then he blows you a kiss, gives you a salute6 and walks away. You are one lucky lady,」 the bus driver said.
Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. She was so lucky for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight, a gift she didn't need to see to believe—the gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.

當這個手持白杖的年輕女子小心翼翼地上車時，車上的乘客都向她投去憐憫的目光。她向司機付了車費之後，雙手摸索著座位，然後坐好，把公文包放在膝蓋上，手杖靠著腿。
34歲的蘇珊失明已有一年了。一起醫療事故奪去了她的視力，她頓時陷入黑暗之中，內心充滿憤怒、沮喪，還有顧影自憐，而她可以依靠的只有她的丈夫馬克了。
馬克是名空軍軍官，他深愛著蘇珊。蘇珊失明的頭些日子，他眼睜睜地看著妻子陷入絕望，心裡打定主意，要盡一切辦法幫助她。
蘇珊終於願意重返工作崗位了。可她怎麼去上班呢？以前都是乘公交車去的，但是她現在很害怕，自己一個人不敢在城裡轉。於是馬克自告奮勇早晚坐公車接送，直到她可以一個人應付。這就是事情的經過。
整整兩周，馬克每天都一身戎裝，陪著蘇珊一起上下班，教她怎麼憑借其他感官，尤其是聽覺，判斷她所處的位置，以及如何適應新的環境。他還幫她與司機交好，這樣司機能照顧她，並給她留個座位。
每天早上，他們都一起同行，然後馬克再乘計程車回去上班。盡管馬克得穿過整座城市，而且疲憊不堪，又花費不菲，但是他堅信蘇珊一定能獨立乘車的，只是時間問題。
最後，蘇珊決定自己獨自坐車上班。星期一上午，臨行前，她緊緊地擁抱著自己的丈夫，眼裡蓄滿了感激的淚水，感謝他的忠誠，他的耐心，還有他的愛。她向他道了別，他們第一次朝著不同的方向走去。周一、周二、周三、周四……每天她的獨行之旅都很順利，蘇珊感到一陣狂喜。她成功了！她真的能一個人去上班了！
周五早上，蘇珊照常乘公共汽車去上班。就要下車了，司機說：「小姐，我真羨慕你啊。」蘇珊感到很奇怪，便問司機為什麼。
「是這樣的，上星期，每天早上都有一個儀表堂堂穿著軍裝的男士一直站在拐彎處看著你下車，看著你安全地穿過街道，又看著你走進辦公樓，他向你飛一個吻，沖你行個禮，然後才動身離去。你真是個幸運的姑娘啊！」 司機說。
蘇珊的臉上流下幸福的淚水。她是幸運的，因為馬克給了她比視力更珍貴的禮物，一份她不需要看就能體會到的禮物——這就是愛的禮物，它能給黑暗帶來光明。

10. 英語短篇文章修改拜託各位大神

Today it was 10 1rt, my grandmather asked me to come(go) back to the hometown to visit him.i hadn't came(gone) back (to)my hometown for ages.So i decided to visit my grandfather.To my surprised(surprise),there were many great changes (which )had happened in (the )past years.There were many tall and modern building which hand't been there(were not there) before.And the ways(streets更好) were wider and more smooth(SMOOTHER) .I knew my hometown better after this time (WHEN) i went back my hometown.I thinked(THOUGHT) i should go back (TO)my hometown more frequently.I was born there,like the son of her.One should never forget where he was born.

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