评论式英语四级作文

A. 关于英语四级 作文

这是我考四六级的法宝，我用这些句子至少可以拿分的作文，希望可以帮你忙吧！祝考试顺利！
结尾万能公式
1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：
Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型：
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
写作的“七项基本原则”
一、 长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！
强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主题句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
六、 多变句式原则
1）加法（串联）
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用：
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2）转折（拐弯抹角）
批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语：
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3）因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语：
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + haveever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
Nothing is more important than to receive ecation.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。）
We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否认的...）
There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ （全世界都知道...）
It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ （毫无疑问的...）
There is no doubt that our ecational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 （...的优点是...）
An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (proce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 （...的原因是...）
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 （如此...以致于...）
So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~ （虽然...）
Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more+ Adj + S + V ~~~（愈...愈...）
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ （借着...，..能够..）
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （..使..能够..）
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ （我们绝对不能...）
例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式 （该是...的时候了）
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~ （...的人...）
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~ （没有人不...）
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V （不得不...）
Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 （可想而知的）
It is obvious that + 句子 （明显的）
It is apparent that + 句子 （显然的）
It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~ （那就是...的原因）
例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式.（过去...年来，...一直...）
For the past 2 years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。
例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中，他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ （...是值得的。）
例句：It pays to help others.
帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on （以...为基础）
例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）
例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 （让...明白...事）
例句：We should bring home to people the valueof working hard.
我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~ （与...息息相关）
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V （养成...的习惯）
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~（因为...）
例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!（多么...！）
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事！
三十一、Leave much to be desired （令人不满意）
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~~ （对...有很大的影响）
例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to （对...有益），do harm to （对...有害）
例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ （对...造成一大威胁）
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best （尽全力去...）
例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。

B. 英语四级考试的作文类型有哪些

1、中文提纲作文

通常提纲作文都是给出三个提纲，每个提纲即是一段，正好符合四级作文“三段论”的布局，同学们可以根据提纲进行描述。例如：A、许多人考证书。B、其目的是什么。但这种作文由于比较简单，现在已经很少进行考查了。

2、素材评论作文

给出一段背景素材，让考生表达对该段素材的看法。素材未必一定是某个事件，也有可能是引语评论作文，引用的内容可能是名人名言，也可能是生活中的谚语，让考生评论其内在含义，并进行相应的文章写作。

3、图画评论作文

根据给定的漫画，通过观察漫画场景，对漫画内容发表评论。这类作文一定要先对漫画场景进行基本描述，然后通过其蕴含的哲理，对现象主旨进行提炼。

4、图表评论作文

根据给定的某事件相关数据，进行数据分析，并对图表中数据反映的直观现象和深层含义进行评论。这类题同图画评论作文一样，要先对图表进行描述，然后再对内容进行探讨和评论。

5、应用文

应用文考的比较多的是书信或电子邮件的书写。2013年12月的六级考试作文中有要求考生写求职信的题目，这类题目虽然考试几率较低，但是同学们也一定要了解书信的格式。

(2)评论式英语四级作文扩展阅读：

报名条件

1、考试对象限制在普通高校内部四年制或以上根据教育大纲修完大学英语四级的在校大学本科生或研究生；

2、同等程度的大专生或硕士研究生经所在学校同意，可在本校报名参加考试；

3、同等程度的夜大或函授大学学生经所在学校同意，可在本校报名参加考试；

从2007年1月的考试开始，大学英语四六级考试将不再对社会考生开放，只对在校大学生开放。

报名方法

以学校为单位自愿参加，集体报名； 考试日若考生在外地实习，仍应在所在学校报名；

报名截止后，不再接受报名。

大学英语作文在整个四级卷面（满分为100分）中占15分，考生在这一部分的得分直接决定其四级成绩。近年来国家教委又明确规定，四级考试中，如果学生作文得零分，那么即使前面得了满分（即85分），其总成绩仍将视为不及格。

写作结构

1、Organize your thoughts before writing: brainstorm、make an outline、etc.下笔前整合思绪：脑力激荡，写出纲要等。

2、Write clearly. Be concise. Avoid wordiness.写作清晰，务必精简，避免赘言。

3、Use good grammar and write complete sentences.使用好的文法，写出完整句子。

4、Write simple sentences. Avoid a fancy style.en211尝试简单句，避免花俏的句法。

5、Avoid slang、cliche and informal words.避免俚语、陈腔滥调和非正式用字

6、Avoid use of the first person (i.e. I/me/my) unless necessary to specific piece.除非必要，避免使用第一人称：如“我/我的”。

Does it sound natural? Does it flow?自然挥洒，大声朗诵。整篇文章听起来自然吗？通顺吗？

8、Move logically from one idea to the next. Don't skip steps.上下句意要合乎逻辑。别毫无章法乱跳。

英语四级各档的分数分布是：听力（35%）249分、阅读（35%）249分、综合（10%）70分、写作和翻译（20%）142分。

C. 一篇观点不同的四级英语作文

Sky Lantern is also called sky lanterns, commonly known as Wishing Lamp, also known as sky lanterns pray. Han is an ancient craft, do military purposes in ancient times. Put lanterns more modern use as a blessing. Hand writing greeting men and women desire, a symbol of harvest success, happiness every year. Usually in the Lantern Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and other major festivals cast.
According to legend, the Five Dynasties (AD 907 ~ 960) when there is a Xin Qiniang, Fujian fight with her husband when she had beaten with bamboo strips square frame, paste paper, made the headlights, put burning turpentine on the chassis, lights into the sky by hot air, is used as a military liaison signal. This turpentine lights, lanterns in Sichuan said. This shape lantern like Zhuge Liang hat, hence the name.
Another argument is that according to legend invented by Zhuge Liang of the Three Kingdoms. At that time, Zhuge Liang was under siege in Pingyang, unable to send troops out of the city for help. Ming considered quasi-wind direction, will be made of paper floating lanterns, the department's help message, then turned out of danger, then later on call this lantern for the lanterns.

D. 名师点评：英语四级作文“校园活动”怎么写

四级作文范文：

The Most Impressive Campus Activity

Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enrich students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I have benefited a lot from all of these well-organized activities, but the one impressing me most is the debate competition which I took part in last year。

That was a debate competition between different majors and the topic was about theoretical knowledge versus practices. What mattered most is not the result of the debate, but gathering background information and practicing the process of debate. Also, no indivial could accomplish the challenging task all by herself or himself, so joint efforts have played a significant role in winning the competition. Team spirit and co-operation has been improved a lot and I believe this is more precious than winning or losing。

E. 英语四级作文和六级作文有什么不同如：字数，词汇，评

首先申明本人已经过四六级，且四级571分，六级535，我个人认为四六级作文主要还是词版汇上的区别权，考六级写作时，只要尽量多用一些亮点词汇就好了，当然不要出现低级的语法错误，而且我认为考六级时未必就要掌握很多很多的词汇，毕竟词汇这个东西是永远都没法掌握完的，只要把你所掌握的高级词汇在写作时运用出来就好了，所以我认为四六级作文其实没有太大的本质区别。
如果是模式的话,那没有什么区别.。六级是四级的延伸,是提高.要想在作文部分拿高分,这和平时的练笔是分不开的。
建议:
1.近年来四六级作文主要侧重于议论文。那不妨好好了解一下,一篇好的议论文应该是怎样的.。
2.在这样的考试中,作文得高分的秘诀就在于有一个好的开头。简明扼要,自然,够新颖,能说明问题.所以我们一直鼓励学生一定要把开头写好。

F. 求对追求时尚的看法的英语四级作文 120字

My View on Following the Fashion
Nowadays more and more young people prefer to follow the fashion. On this phenomenon, different people have different views. It is held that one should follow the fashion so as not to be despised or considered eccentric. But it is also held that one should have one's own judgment.
Those who hold the first opinion think that society is progressing and one should adapt oneself to the constant change. In their opinion, if everyone always sticks to the old fashion, there won't be any change and naturally there won't be progress. In contrast, those who hold the second view think that one shouldn't follow the fashion without discrimination and one should have one's own judgment and characteristics.
As for me, I agree with the latter opinion. Admittedly, one should be flexible and adapt himself to the situation, but this is not to say that one should follow the fashion without discrimination because the fashion may not be beneficial.We should consider whether the fashion is favorable or unfavorable. Moreover, one should have one's own characteristics. If everyone follows the same fashion, there will not be variety and the whole society will be monotonous.

我对赶时髦的看法
现在越来越多的年轻人喜欢赶时髦，对于这一现象，不同的人有不同的看法。有人认为为了不被轻视或被认为古怪应该赶时髦，但是也有人认为应该有自己的判断。
那些持第一种观点的人认为社会在进步应该使自己适应不断的变化。他们认为如果人人总是坚持旧的方式，就不会有变化，自然也就不会有进步。比较起来，持第二种观点的人认为不应该不加辨别地赶时髦，应该有自己的判断和特点。
就我看采，我同意后者的意见。诚然，人应该灵活以适应形势，但是这并不是说应该不加辨别地赶时髦，因为它也许没有益处，我们应该考虑它是有利还是不利，而且，应该有自己的特点。如果人人都赶同样妁时髦，就不会有变化，整个社会就单调如二。

G. 英语四级作文关于赞美的

你好，很高兴为你解答，答案如下：

On Praise
Everyone wants to be appreciated and praised by others for what they do and what they say. For instance, children want to be praised by their parents. Students want to be praised by their teachers. Employees want to be praised by their employers. It seems that praise is like sunlight to us, we can‘t flower and grow without it.
But it is a pity that while most of us are only too ready to blow the cold wind of harsh criticism on others, we are somehow reluctant to give people around us the warm sunshine of praise. For example, most mothers are always not satisfied with the progress their children made at school Most teachers always drown their students compositions in critical red ink, instead of commenting favorably on them.
Most employersarealways criticalabout what their employees have done instead of giving encouragement to them. proces may be great. So, let‘s be alert to the small excellence around us and comment on them. We will not only bring joy into other people’s lives, but also, very often, add happiness to our own.
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H. 英语四级作文怎么评分

简单来说，是以下几条：
14分 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，无重大语言错误，仅有个别小错。
11分 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，但有少量语言错误。
8分 基本切题。有些地方表达不清，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
5分 基本切题。思想表达不清，连贯性差，有较多的语言严重错误。
2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分有错误，且多数为严重错误。
详细具体的定义为:
考生在考试时应该明确作文的评分标准，根据大纲规定，短文的评分标准是：

1．正确表达思想；
2．意义连贯；
3．无重大语法错误。
这三者是互补的，但又各有侧重。为评分的方便，国家考题组又将评分原则归纳为八个字，即“总体评分”和“综合评判”，并作了相应的解释。前者指的是“阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分”。后者指的是“要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍，用词和造句是否清楚确切地表达思想”。根据这八个字，又将阅卷标准分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分，每一等都可上下浮动一分，各等的具体标准如下：
2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分--基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8分--基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。
11分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。
除了以上五个主要标准之外，评分时还考虑以下三个因素：
l．白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给零分。
2. 字数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分，61-70个词扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足50个词最多只给5分)。所计字数不包括卷面上已给主题句。
3．只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。