雅思英语作文在线批改

⑴ 雅思作文跪求大神修改！求打分！（请勿用批改软件）

也就六分吧，虽然内容还好，用词还算可以，但是逻辑性不强，论点论据论证阐述不专明确。
好好整理一下逻辑属结构，和用一些提分的单词，分数可能会达到6分以上。 (再有仔细点 e.g. pay for workers extra work）

⑵ 一直说新奇雅思有写作批改的 具体怎么弄啊

就是你写作文，他们那请专业的老师给你改。我弄过一张，感觉还行。老师专改的挺负责挺属仔细的，逻辑啊，语法啊，内容结构布置啊，连拼写错误都给改出来了。。额。我错了好多。。丢人。。 从我个人的感觉来说，如果你这4篇都是认真写的话，收获还挺大的。

⑶ 想要寻求免费的雅思作文批改，哪里有

可以去批改网上注册一个账号。如果能帮到你，请采纳。

⑷ 雅思作文请批改！！！！！

第一段：
the future and present --- 改为 the future and the present

that it semms impossible to find a balance between them.--改为 that it seems to be impossible that figuring out a balance between each other.

I believe both the countries and indivials should have a clear awareness of what is vital to nowadays and the prosperity in the future days.---改为 it is believed that both conutries and
indivials ought to have clear views of what is considered as vital to nowadays society and prosperity for the future.

第二段：

As for countries,it depends on the develpment of it.Thait means developed and developing countries should focus on different topics. 改为: For countries, whether the further or the present is important is defend on their development, which means that the focusing topics are different for developed regions and developing countries.

还有很多需要该的地方............

⑸ 哪里有免费批改雅思作文的。。。。

我教你个方法，你去各个雅思培训的网站，装作要去报名，有的要注册一下，然后上面就有试用次数，用完了然后换一个网站就行了

⑹ 有能批改英语作文的app吗雅思

同学你好！
你可以登录朗阁写作一对一批改页面进行作文提交批改，名师点评专会通过邮箱反馈给你哦。属
地址http://www.longre.com/topic_2013/zt/ysnh_1015/zuowen.aspx

⑺ 求雅思作文批改（小作文而已，100悬赏，跪求老师改作文）

以下希望能帮到你：

The table (or "graph") shows the data about the breakdown of different kinds of Australian people in 1999.

It indicates obviously that the aged took up the least proportion in comparison to all the other types of people. Among them, the single aged people's proportion was 6%, while the couples was about 4%. Thereafter, the single aged had made a dramatic cause in bringing about the impoverishment. The Australian people who remained single, no matter they had child or not, occupies the biggest number in the table (or "graph") , which is about double of the people who were married. What is more ,as it can be told by the table (or "graph"), most of the Australian people were tended to form populous families —— getting marriage, having children, or living together with all the members of the whole family. In conclusion, there was only a few people lived in poverty in that time.

⑻ 哪儿有免费的雅思作文批改比较好的

把你的习作贴到太傻上去吧。。会有很多热心网友批改。别的免费的还要比较好的就不大现实了。

⑼ 求批改英语作文(IELTS)

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?

Should men and women be equal? This is a much talked about question nowadays. In fact, sex is always a barrier for a woman to achieve their success in her career. I firmly believe that women should be given the same right as men, because they are equally important in all human activities.

First of all, with the rapidly development of society and economy, there have emerged many working opportunities and women are certainly as intelligent as men if they have a same ecation. Therefore, some high-level jobs are more occupied by women than the past. As this result, it proved that women have the same abilities as men. Personally, it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the abilities of men and women and it should be according to indivial abilities and not focus on the gender.

Secondly, the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Not all women are bad at business, just as not all men are poor interpersonal communicators. For example, if men are often calm and thoughtfully, but some men are more careless and hesitant than women? Beside, if women are always sensitive, then what would you say when they are insensitive in work or interpersonal. Obviously, there are no absolute advantages when considering their gender.

In conclusion, as a man, I would hopefully see that more outstanding women can be working their favourite jobs and can get their desirable position. Because a person’ indivial ability is far more important than their gender.

⑽ 哪里可以免费批改雅思作文最好是网上。谢谢。。

其实，现在很多的雅思作文批改都不是免费的，而且很多雅思作文批改的老师的内收费都很高，我也是一容名雅思考生，我的雅思作文都是到雅思作文救星上面批改的，雅思作文救星可以说是唯一一个支持免费批改雅思作文的，除了有作文的分数之外，还有非常详细的点评和讲解！