新媒体的利弊雅思英语作文
『壹』 求一篇雅思的英语作文
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.
这是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文范文,相信对你有用,你也可以去看看其它的范文。
『贰』 雅思英语作文 快餐的利与弊
说真的,楼上这文顶多5.5分!
第一句就够倒考官胃口的了!十个考生8个是回这样的!答还是用这个吧!
There is a general debate nowadays about the problem of fast food.
说真的这篇,太常见了!所有人都是这么模仿的!
『叁』 备考雅思:task2的利弊类作文到底应该怎么写
说到雅思写作利弊类话题大家的第一反应就是典型的考试指令“Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?”或者是“Is it a positive or negative development?” 这种特别直接的提问方式是有助于我们快速定位到题目的答题要领的,但是殊不知在其他的提问方式中,其实也隐藏了很多利弊类的题目。我们先给大家呈现几道相关的题目。
1. More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?
2. News media have become more influential in our life. Some people think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3. Some people think robots are important to our society, while others believe they are dangerous and have negative effects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
先简单和大家分析一下这样三道题目。这三道题乍眼一看没有任何相关的地方,无论是从话题方向上还是提问方式上,其中:
第一题是生活类话题方向,提问方式是优缺点比较,但文章重点要把安全措施利弊的侧重点体现出来;
第二题是新闻媒体类方向,提问方式是同意不同意,但文章重点是在讨论新闻媒体是否是消极的发展;
第三题是科技类方向,提问方式是双边讨论类,但文章重点是分别讨论机器人的利弊问题。
仔细把题目读完之后,我们就会发现其实无论怎么出题,核心内容就是针对某一个特殊主题讨论利弊。但是文章的答题要点是不一样的,第一题是典型的偏向性作文;第二题可以有偏向,也可以中立,甚至也可以一边倒;第三题是权衡的写法(类似于中立)。不管怎么说,我们首要的还是要会读题。本文中,笔者将和大家一起来探讨典型的利弊类作文“Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages”的写作技巧,希望能给各位考生在后期的备考中有一些帮助。
1. 利弊类作文的词汇储备
利弊类题目的写作核心是讨论利弊,所以对于烤鸭们来说首先就应该去积累相关的表达优缺点的词汇,这样可以有助于在作文中表达观点。
a. 优点常用词汇:advantages, positive effects, benefit, merit, important, effective, pro
常用短语:be helpful/useful to; make contributions to; play a key role in; have profound/far-reaching effects on
b. 缺点常用词汇:disadvantages, demerits, negative effects, con, defects
常用短语:cause problems; be harmful to; be detrimental to; pose a threat to; pose a risk to
2. 利弊类作文的段落书写
当我们已经对于固有词汇有了一定的了解之后,那下一步工作就可以进行题目的剖析,然后展开段落的书写。
我们以第一题为例:
More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?
题目翻译:现在在很多大城市里有越来越多预防犯罪的措施来提高城市的安全性。你认为这些措施的优点大于缺点吗?
a. 题目关键词
1). urban areas这个词很多考生在读题的时候容易把它忽略不看,这是一种错误的读题方法,因为这类词是典型的地点限制词,会对题目的论点把控起到一定的提示作用。它的同义替换词可以是city center或者是downtown, 它的反义词是rural areas, outskirts或者是countryside。
2). security measures或者是anti-crime measures是这道题目的核心词汇,要拿下这一道题目,我们就得进行一定的头脑风暴,想出有哪些常见的安全性措施,例如监控(monitoring systems), 安检(security check), 警察巡逻(police patrols)等。
b. 考试指令的分析
显性的利弊类话题最典型的提问方式就是“Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?” 这种题目的解题技巧就在于怎么把“outweigh”这个词在文章中具体地体现出来。它的一些同义表达有greater, more than, exceed等。对于这种提问方式,我们一般给出如下建议。
1). 首先我们需要做的就是在文章的比例方面要有一定的侧重性体现。一般如果认为优点大于缺点的时候,那我们在优点这个段落上的字数建议要100字左右,用2-3个论点来支持。而对于缺点来讲,就可以少写一点,字数建议在80字左右,用1-2个论点来支撑中心句。
2). 除了文章长短之外,还有要注意到的就是语气问题。同样的如果认为优点大于缺点的,那我们在表达优点的时候就要使用比较坚定的态度或词汇(should, be supposed to, ought to), 而在表达缺点的时候,语气适当可以放弱(may, might)或者给出一些可行的建议来弱化它的缺点。
c. 段落示范
在完成了上述的审题过程之后,我们就可以进行全文的书写了。
1). 先是开头部分
优缺点类作文的开头部分和其他的提问方式没有太大的区别,也是由背景、题目改写以及个人观点三部分来构成的。这里重点和大家讲解一下最后一句个人观点的表达方法。推荐句式:
In my opinion, the positive effects are greater than the negative ones.
I think there are more advantages than disadvantages.
From my perspective, although there are some drawbacks, the influence can also be beneficial in many cases.
总结一下,上面三句话的核心意思就是想告诉大家碰到利大于弊这种类型的题目,一定要在开头观点部分把它表达清楚,千万不能有模棱两可的情况,不然task response这一块分数就会减少。
2). 当开头基本明确要求之后,就要开始主体段的写作了。正如之前分析的,主体段分为两段,优点和缺点各一段就可以了。先来回忆一下一个段落是由中心句加上几个论点的形式构成的,论点一般推荐2个。
我们以上面那道题目为例:
1). 先来写好处的中心句
学生句子:Indeed, having security measures has many advantages for local citizens. (10 words)
句子评价:这一句话就内容和句式上来说并没有错误,但是它基本只能符合5.5分的水平,因为它在词汇使用和内容丰富性上还是稍微差了点。
教师句子:It is obvious that the installation of security measures in buildings and on streets is an effective means of local citizens’ safety. (22 words)
句子评价:这个句子出彩的地方在于其词汇的多样使用,例如installation这个词,动词变名词的用法在作文中的使用频率还是比较高的。另外an effective means这个短语搭配也不错,是学生句子中的advantages的另外一个表达。使用in buildings and on streets这个介词短语来修饰句子可以更好地和之前头脑风暴中的点相结合,体现内容的充实性。
2). body 1论点的论证(好处段)
这个点最重要的推荐论证手法就是举例论证,分别对于室内和室外两种不同的安全措施进行详细描述即可。但是一定要注意的就是要把优点写清楚,不然在任务完成度上就不能有一个很好的体现。
a. 室内的措施---监控---起到震慑和提醒作用(与中心句中的in buildings形成一致)
For example, 24-hour surveillance cameras can remind(语气相对比较坚定) the would-be criminals that they have no chance to escape from the supervising(监管) of the police. Therefore, this kind of deterrent(震慑) makes those potential lawbreakers give up evil intension(罪恶念头).(典型的举例论证,37 words)
b. 室外的措施---警察巡逻---能够及时抓住罪犯(与中心句中的on street形成一致)
Meanwhile, the frequency of police patrols(警察巡逻) can stop illegal activities(违法行为), such as thefts and robberies, thus recing the crime rate in open space directly and providing a safe living environment for local citizens. (典型的举例论证,33 words)
一句中心句加上2个论证合在一起,整个写好处的段落就是97个字,基本符合我们上面讲解的100字左右的要求。
3). body 2论点的论证(缺点段)
缺点部分这一段落的具体写法和好处是一致的,但是要注意的是由于观点偏向于优点,所以这一段在篇幅上可以稍微短一点,语气词上也可以弱一点。
段落示范:However, what we have to bear in mind is that there are also some negative effects when taking too many security measures in large city centers.(缺点中心句) One of the most worrying effects(重点讲一个方面即可) is that these anti-crime devices may increase(语气词弱化) the fear of crime and people’s freedom and privacy would be restricted or even invaded e to the surveillance cameras installed in many public places. All these may have a detrimental effect on people’s quality of life. (76 words)
主体段落书写总结:段落的结构和论证形式在一定程度上和其他提问方式是一样的。唯一的区别就在于我们应该如何挑选典型的优点和缺点来说服考官。
4). 结尾段的写法
利弊类作文的结尾段还是分为两要素。第一部分是观点的总结,当然这一部分的观点是可以根据正文部分有效输入分论点的。第二部分就是可以针对缺点进行题目的升华,换句话说就是可以给出一些建议或者措施把缺点尽量减少或者消除。
『肆』 新媒体的优势和特点英语作文
Advantages of new media
The so-called new media, compared with the traditional media, the difference between the new media and traditional media, does not lie in the emergence of time, but in the form of communication and content of different.
Once upon a time, the prevalence of the Internet, the instry has been lamented, the network media has become the fourth media after the newspaper, radio, television media. In a period of time, the network media has become synonymous with the new media, it seems that the introction of new media, people can not help but think of the network media. The Internet is the new media, however, that the new media network media is correct? The answer is not correct. The passage of time, the development of the times, the progress of science and technology, with more and more communication modes and content form emerging forms of media, such as digital TV, mobile TV, mobile phone SMS, building elevator advertising, mobile phone TV etc..
Finally, it can be made clear that the so-called new media, refers to all different from the traditional media in terms of a variety of forms of communication with the content of the form of continuous updates, emerging new media.
新媒体的优势
所谓新媒体,是相对于传统媒体而言的,新媒体与传统媒体的区别,不在于出现时间的先后,而在于传播方式和内容形态的不同。
曾几何时,互联网络的盛行,曾经使业内人士无不感叹,网络媒介已经成为继报纸、广播、电视媒体之后的第四大传播媒介。在一段时期内,网络媒介成了新媒体的代名词,似乎一提起新媒体,人们都会不由自主地想到就是网络媒介。互联网就是新媒体,但是,说新媒体就是网络媒体正确吗?答案是不正确。时间的推移,时代的发展,科技的变迁,具有越来越多传播方式和内容形态的媒体形式不断涌现,如数字电视、车载电视、楼宇电梯广告、手机短信、手机电视等等。
最后,可以明确地说,所谓新媒体,是指一切区别于传统媒体而言的具有多种传播形式与内容形态的不断更新、不断涌现的新型媒体。
『伍』 网络课程和传统课程优缺点的英语作文
1Learning in the Internet and the tradictional learning are the most common method in our daily study and life.
2The two ways both have their advantage and disadvantage.
3Learning in the Internet has the advantage that it brings free time for students to study.
4Moreover,it can be watched repeatedly, which can deepen the impression.
5However,it also has the disadvantage that teacher cannot supervise the students' study.
6The tradictional learning supplyes the Internet's disadvantage, for it has a perfect supervise machism.
7But it doesn't mean the tradictional's has not shortcoming.
8It limit the students' freedom and let students' be passive.
『陆』 一个英语作文雅思的求一篇范文
可以从个人发展和社会发展角度去探讨。
个人有权利追求更好的工作环境和待遇,以及在此专过程中自己水平的更属大提升;
这些有技术的高层次人才在发达国家工作,有利于更好的发挥自己的特长,从而带动全社会乃至全人类的发展和进步。
雅思还是要自己多写多练啦~~
『柒』 雅思英语作文
建议抄首先可以参加袭北外雅思培训班,上完课后要整理笔记,总结开头-主体段落-结论的具体写法以及常用的语言结构。
考前50~60天,练习句子翻译考前40天,练习观点和词汇:挑选各个专题的话题若干,每天训练观点和词汇构思+段落写作;
考前30天:以熟练为主,完成写作训练。结合上课教授的写作方法和思路+每天构思得来的观点——不限时写作(每两天一篇)。
考前20天:挑选三种文体的代表作,请老师批改并面授点评,看看问题所在,有针对性提高和改正。
考前15天:限时写作,每天一到两篇,提高写作的感觉和速度。
『捌』 出国留学的利与弊 ,英语作文! 急急急!
Advantages:It widens students' knowledge and horizons, meanwhile cultivats their independence and personalities. learn advanced knowledge and experience. Provides opportunities to students, who can learn advanced management experience. Then students have to deal with many problems whey they study abroad, thdy have to learn how to be accustomed to a new environment and how to get well with the teachers and classmates.By communicating with foreign students, they will see the differences from their own. Finally, can provide a good language environment and make it easy to pick up a language.
Disadvantages: students will confronted with many phychological problems. they feel lonely and helpness in a new environment.Futhermore, the tuition is too much , which is a heavy financial burden to the average people. Not only that, students may also experience homesickness when away from their families so long.
写了论点,你自己整理下
『玖』 雅思英语作文2篇,要求每篇250字左右。
作文需要好好练习的