青少年犯罪雅思英语作文

⑴ 雅思l 犯罪类教育类话题到底怎么写

1. 先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达
criminals 名词，罪犯（值得注意的是，该词有形容词性）。
offenders 名词，罪犯，违法者。
convicts 名词，罪犯，囚徒（前段时间很红的一套书《囚徒健身》，"Convict Conditioning"）。
culprits 名词，犯人。同时，本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。
outlaws 名词，罪犯，暴徒。也有动词词性，并且为及物动词，译为宣布某事为不合法。
suspect （criminal suspect）名词，犯罪嫌疑人。其实，在法庭最终宣判之前，我们口中的罪犯多数情况下应该用这个词表达，更为严谨。
prisoner 名词，犯人，囚犯。
juvenile criminals 名词，青少年罪犯。
minor criminals 名词，未成年罪犯。
juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词，少年犯，或行为不端的青少年
值得注意的是，其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中，未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。因此后面几个词汇，需要大家重点掌握。
2. 来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达，要注意词性标注
commit a crime (commit crimes) 动宾，犯罪
violate the law / break the law 动宾，犯罪，违法
offend against the law 动宾，违法
violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词+名词，暴力犯罪/非暴力犯罪
delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors形容词+名词，不法的行为
juvenile delinquency 名词，特指青少年的不法行为
illegality 名词，泛指所有违法行为。此外，immorality 名词，指的是不道德的行为，其实近似于违法行为，但是略有区别。同理，副词illegally和immorally也是类似的区别
wrongdoing / misconct / delinquency 名词，都是指的是行为不端
请见如下例文：（青少年违法之后应该如何被惩罚永远是雅思考试的常见话题）
引导阅读原文：
There is no denying that everyone should be punished e to his/her illegality, no matter how old he/she is. Notwithstanding, this does not imply that juvenile culprits should be treated as equally as alt prisoners. Juvenile detentions ought to be the place for those minor offenders instead of common jails, and besides juvenile suspects should be on trial in juvenile court where their right can be protected much better.
Juvenile convicts with violent crimes should be detained in juvenile detentions as they might be potential threats to our society, and on the other hand minor culprits with non-violent crimes can be punished with more flexibility such as being forced to do social work.
PS: Juvenile detentions 名词，少管所
juvenile court 名词，未成年人法庭
detain 及物动词，羁押

3. 犯罪率的表达方式
Crime rate / incident of crime
如何降低犯罪率，是经常在雅思写作中被讨论的话题。
Unbelievably high juvenile crime rate is plaguing many countries all over the world, and how to rece it has become prime task for those governments for a long time.
4. rehabilitate criminals / reform criminals 动宾，改造罪犯
Main function of prisons is not only punishing culprits with locking them up but also rehabilitating them as everyone no matter what he/she has done deserves a second chance. 监狱的功能不仅是限制犯人的自由，还要给这些犯人提供一个改过自新的机会。
5. 几个导致青少年犯罪的原因如下：
Lack of moral ecation 名词性，缺少德育教育（lack一词在实际写作中是考生们常犯错误的地方，请看后面的注解。）
Inappropriate parenting 名词性，不恰当的家庭教育
Being exposed to misleading information from media 动名词性质，暴露于媒体的诱导性信息
Lack of ability of telling right from wrong 名词性，缺少辨别是非的能力
Blindly imitate what they often see or read in media 动宾结构，盲目模仿在媒体中看到的或者听到的事物
PS： 关于lack
首先，可以是及物动词。例如：With stress from exams, students lack enthusiasm on learning any kind of art.
其次，名词，多用于词组 be lack of / be lack in = be short of 例如：Generally speaking, high crime rate, to a great extent, can be attributed to lack of law enforcement capacity of police.
再次，lacking 形容词，常用词组 be lacking of / be lacking in 例如： Fresh graates are usually lacking in working experience that is required badly on majority of job positions.

⑵ 雅思大作文范文“青少年犯罪应不应该接受和成年人同样

Teenager delinquency is becoming an increasing concern. Some people claim that only lenient sentences can not curb the major crimes, therefore, their punishment should not be differentiated from the alts. However, I can not totally agree to this.

Those who support the same fixed sentence towards both youth and grown-ups argue that without harsh punishment, juveniles would not realize the serious after effect of their behaviour and leave the victims and their families suffering. Simply, the best solution is to treat them like the alt if the crimes they commit are every bit as heinous as alt.

However, adolescents do not have the same physical and mental condition as alt, so applying the same penalty is not reasonable for all situations. The causalities of high criminal rate of teenager rooted deeply in the social environment- family and media influences for example. As the young, some of them are naturally daring and knows no boundaries. If the media presents violent actions as cool, then young people may regard gangster as hero, gain sense of powerful and develop big ego by bullying others or commit severe crimes like robbery or a violent attacks as a result. To radically settle the problem, morals should be taught and the positive way to show off strength should be presented on TV more.

Another reason I think juvenile offenders should not be tried and punished as alt is that there is a chance for rehabilitation. However violent crimes they committed, with alternative ways of punishment or easier sentence, there is much greater possibility for them to reestablish the value, return to normal life and even shift gears to become leader of certain area. Compared with alt criminals, the young ones are more capable of learning from their mistakes. Once they understand the consequences of their behaviour and realize their desired goal of life, they rehabilitate much faster. Conversely, if they are punished the same way as alt, chances are that they become repeat criminals or serial offenders, since they are taught more criminal techniques and their identity of criminal is strengthened when captured in jail.

Although based on rule of justice, heinous acts should be punished regardless of the age, for sake of long term benefit, collaborative efforts of the whole society should be taken to save the juvenile offenders by every possible solution except for equivalent penalty as alt in many instances.

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⑶ 雅思写作犯罪类话题怎么写好

1.先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达
criminals 名词，罪犯（值得注意的是，该词有形容词性）。
offenders 名词，罪犯，违法者。
convicts 名词，罪犯，囚徒（前段时间很红的一套书《囚徒健身》，“Convict Conditioning”）。
culprits 名词，犯人。同时，本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。
outlaws 名词，罪犯，暴徒。也有动词词性，并且为及物动词，译为宣布某事为不合法。
suspect （criminal suspect）名词，犯罪嫌疑人。其实，在法庭最终宣判之前，我们口中的罪犯多数情况下应该用这个词表达，更为严谨。
prisoner 名词，犯人，囚犯。
juvenile criminals 名词，青少年罪犯。
minor criminals 名词，未成年罪犯。
juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词，少年犯，或行为不端的青少年
值得注意的是，其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中，未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。因此后面几个词汇，需要大家重点掌握。
2. 来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达，要注意词性标注commit a crime (commit crimes) 动宾，犯罪
violate the law / break the law 动宾，犯罪，违法
offend against the law 动宾，违法
violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词+名词，暴力犯罪/非暴力犯罪
delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors形容词+名词，不法的行为
juvenile delinquency 名词，特指青少年的不法行为
illegality 名词，泛指所有违法行为。此外，immorality 名词，指的是不道德的行为，其实近似于违法行为，但是略有区别。同理，副词illegally和immorally也是类似的区别
wrongdoing / misconct / delinquency 名词，都是指的是行为不端
请见如下例文：（青少年违法之后应该如何被惩罚永远是雅思考试的常见话题）
There is no denying that everyone should be punished e to his/her illegality, no matter how old he/she is. Notwithstanding, this does not imply that juvenile culprits should be treated as equally as alt prisoners. Juvenile detentions ought to be the place for those minor offenders instead of common jails, and besides juvenile suspects should be on trial in juvenile court where their right can be protected much better.
Juvenile convicts with violent crimes should be detained in juvenile detentions as they might be potential threats to our society, and on the other hand minor culprits with non-violent crimes can be punished with more flexibility such as being forced to do social work.
PS:Juvenile detentions 名词，少管所
juvenile court 名词，未成年人法庭
detain 及物动词，羁押
3.犯罪率的表达方式
Crime rate / incident of crime
如何降低犯罪率，是经常在雅思写作中被讨论的话题。
Unbelievably high juvenile crime rate is plaguing many countries all over the world, and how to rece it has become prime task for those governments for a long time.
4.rehabilitate criminals / reform criminals 动宾，改造罪犯
Main function of prisons is not only punishing culprits with locking them up but also rehabilitating them as everyone no matter what he/she has done deserves a second chance. 监狱的功能不仅是限制犯人的自由，还要给这些犯人提供一个改过自新的机会。
5.几个导致青少年犯罪的原因如下：
Lack of moral ecation 名词性，缺少德育教育（lack一词在实际写作中是考生们常犯错误的地方，请看后面的注解。）
Inappropriate parenting 名词性，不恰当的家庭教育
Being exposed to misleading information from media 动名词性质，暴露于媒体的诱导性信息
Lack of ability of telling right from wrong 名词性，缺少辨别是非的能力
Blindly imitate what they often see or read in media 动宾结构，盲目模仿在媒体中看到的或者听到的事物
PS：关于lack
首先，可以是及物动词。例如：With stress from exams, students lack enthusiasm on learning any kind of art.
其次，名词，多用于词组 be lack of / be lack in = be short of 例如：Generally speaking, high crime rate, to a great extent, can be attributed to lack of law enforcement capacity of police.
再次，lacking 形容词，常用词组 be lacking of / be lacking in 例如： Fresh graates are usually lacking in working experience that is required badly on majority of job positions.
6. Benefit / beneficial / Beneficiary 这几个词汇并不算难, 但是考生对于其词性掌握一直不理想. 在此, 重点强调一下词性.
Benefit 可为名词, 同时也可以为动词, 并且可以是Vt也可以是Vi。请对比下面两个句子。
Governments will enjoy the benefits from their huge investment in ecation field in a long run.
Governments will benefit from their huge investment in ecation field in a long run.
第一句中的benefits为名词，后面的from为介词，实则是一个介词短语作为定语修饰前文的benefits。而第二句中，benefit from为一个动词词组，指的是受益于某人或某事。
Beneficial 形容词，通常的词组是 be beneficial to 近义词组 be good for / be salutary to
University ecation will be definitely beneficial to one’s future career.
Beneficiary, 名词，指的是受益者，受惠者。
Obviously, beneficiaries of dissemination of high-quality ecation are both indivials and governments.
Beneficence, 名词，指的是善行。其实在一些语境中，它指的含义就是好处。见下例句：
Some people blindly and excessively have their faith in the beneficence of technological advance. 一些人盲目地并且过度地对科技发展带来的好处加以信任。
7. Access 一词在教育类写作中也时常出现。其常见词性有两个。
首先，名词。译为，进入，使用权等。意思比较抽象。通常用于词组have access to, 可使用什么，可接近什么。例如：
Contemporarily, with popularity of internet, schoolchildren can easily have access to some illegal and harmful information that they should not have known.
其次，动词，及物。译为，使用，接近等。例如：
What children can easily access online is what they can never find in their textbooks.
8. 对某人或某事负责，在写作中非常常见。下面给大家几个相关的表达，如下:
Be in charge of doing / sth.
Take charge of doing / sth.
Have/has a ty to do sth.
Have/has an obligation to do sth.
Be responsible for doing sth. / sth.
9. bring the talent and creativity into full play 充分发挥才智与创新 (动宾结构)
在对于课程安排或者是教学方法的评述中，充分发挥才智与创新可以算是其优点。如下：
Given that students are able to apply for courses according to their interest, university ecation will indeed bring their talent and creativity into full play.
10. 教育系统产出物之一就是人才，如下是几个人才的描述方式：
personnel with interdisciplinary knowledge and well-rounded ability 复合型人才
interdisciplinary talents 夸学科人才
senior personnel / top talents / advanced talents 高级人才
well-ecated workforce 受到良好教育的劳动力
high-end labor 高端劳动力
希望我的回答可以帮助到你。

⑷ 雅思阅读写作技巧，英语作文实在让我头疼~希望能够得到高手指点~

雅思写作备考是所有雅思考试项目中耗时最多也是最不容易在短期内出效果的，所以大家在备考自己雅思写作考试的时候，一定要掌握一些雅思写作备考策略。
雅思写作备考策略一：积累写作词汇的语料库
备考阶段，要有意识地积累特殊的写作词汇。
雅思考试理论上要准备8000词汇，但是写作的核心词汇只有几百个，却可以应付200多个雅思作文题目，所以我们要扎实地积累自己对于每一个给定话题的语料库。比如我们写肥胖问题，需要分析肥胖的原因和危害以及如何减肥，这时候你不但要有观点，还有懂得遗传基因、营养过剩、饮食习惯不良、缺乏锻炼，有氧运动等相关词汇的英文表达方式。雅思经常考的一些文化类、环保性、犯罪类的题材。我们就应当有针对性的准备文化、环保、犯罪类的词汇，以建立自己的写作词汇语料库。
雅思写作备考策略二：积累分支观点支持句
面对茫茫题海，许多人感到茫然不知所措，全部话题都去准备，不切实际，时间和精力不够，不全面准备，心中又没底。这个棘手的问题如何解决?
Martin老师建议是：第一，多积累主题观点句以及分支观点的支持句，多多积累和丰富自己对于给定话题的观点，使观点从无到有，从有到多，从多到精。第二，善于从不同的话题中找到有共性的通用论据。比如该不该拿小动物做实验，该不该建动物园，该不该吃它们的肉用他们的皮做衣服，这些问题的论据是可以通用的——动物是人类的好朋友;应该保护濒临灭绝的小动物;动物的生存权利不应该被剥夺。比如犯罪类话题——校园暴力、女性犯罪、青少年犯罪、吸毒、赌博，它们的根源，危害和解决途径都是大同小异的。以上是新~动 态的Martin老师整理的雅思阅读写作技巧之备考策略。

⑸ 雅思大作文范文：如何处罚青少年犯罪

Nowadays, an ever-INCREASING rate of juvenile delinquency has attracted widespread attention. Youth, variety and high-tech are marked indications of this crime. In the following discussion, I will analyse its reasons and propose my solutions.
As far as I am concerned, there are an array of complicated factors attributed to such phenomenon. First and foremost, excessive media such as Internet ,TV and films are to blame for getting our children access to the bloodY and violent contents. Lacking capacity to distinguish good and evil, they are more likely to imitate the violence and various crimes exposed to them(,) without a recognition that they will regret in the future. Another considerable reason should be mentioned is that teachers and parents only focus on the youth's academic results rather than their interest and psychological problems. As we always give priority to exam scores, those who (cannot) perform well tend to get TOO frustrated to study and take a hostile attitude toWARD ALL OF society. Some of them even commit a crime as a revenge to society when they are /always/FOREVER BEING/ criticized by their teachers and parents.
Considering some of them being in contravention of rules and laws unconsciously, we should not press a charge on them simply or they will stray from right path again in the future. A ""Special care ""DEpartment should be set up in order to enable them to pick up their optimism toWARD the world(,) and their own goals in their lives.With appropriate guidance, they can learn job skills and useful knowledge. Most importantly, effective plans should be implemented to accelerate the reform of ecation and augment stern supervision on media.
To conclude, we are confronted with an EVER-increasing juvenile delinquency. Thus, joint effort of schools, households and government are needed to afford a healthy and suitable environment for our teenager's growth.
To conclude, we are confronted with an increasing juvenile delinquency. Thus, joint effort of schools, households and government are needed to afford a healthy and suitable environment for our teenager's growth.

⑹ 雅思作文6.5分以上人进

雅思写作对于雅思备考的同学来讲都是一个不小的难点。同学们都知道雅思写作的满分是9分，那么雅思写作5.5分好拿吗?实际在上雅思5.5分只能算是一个中间的成绩。下面小编给大家分享关于深度解析雅思写作5.5分的相关内容，希望可以帮到正在雅思备考的同学。
雅思写作5.5分好拿吗?先要了解评分标准：
雅思写作评分标准一：TaskResponse。
对于想要拿5.5分的考生来说，有两个关键点考验：其一，写作题目中有关键性生词，从而导致整篇文章写偏题。其二，能够想到一两个论点，但是往往对于论点没有展开。
对于1点来说，熟悉写作机经是比较有效的解决手段：将写作机经里面不认识的关键词汇全部挑出来关键记忆。同时坚持分析机经(较好是按照话题进行分类的机经)能够在一定程度上熟悉雅思写作考的范围，熟悉平时老师所说的常考话题的具体考方向。
比如，在犯罪当中，经常涉及的具体方向包括：减少犯罪的方法，监狱的目的，重复犯罪，青少年犯罪，处理罪犯的方式，警察持枪等。当考生明白不同方面的话题雅思经常考哪个方向的问题时，读不懂题目或者严重跑题的现象几乎可以避免了。
对于2点来说，考生可以逐渐培养列写作提纲的习惯。按照分析题目——列提纲——梳理观点——论点举证——反向论证——论据支持的思路，养成良好的写作习惯。
雅思写作评分标准二：CoherenceandCohesion。
对于想要拿5.5分的考生来说，其实逻辑要求还不算太强，只要掌握如何对论点展开论证能够满足要求，因此，不必特别担心。
举个例子：含有暴力内容的电视节目往往会导致青少年形成不良的行为方式。对于这个论点，接下来应该思考：为什么暴力内容的节目会让青少年产生不良行为呢?后面的展开内容便显而易见了：暴力的电视节目使打架甚至杀人变得具有趣味性和刺激性，它教会孩子们用暴力解决问题，因此，孩子们很容易在现实生活中模仿并且对周围的人变得更具有攻击性。
雅思写作评分标准三：LexicalResource。
拿5.5分词汇量的要求在5000左右，其实并不难达到，考生在考过程中要尽量使用自己会的单词，并且达到单词拼写以及用法的准确性即可。除此之外，还有一些必要的而学生自己却不会表达的单词，比如上文中提到的暴力，模仿，行为，违法等等，发现自己有不会的单词，立刻进行积累和背诵。
需要注意的点是：在词汇积累过程中，千万不要死记硬背，要仔细分析单词的词性和常用语境，再进行记忆。
雅思写作评分标准四：GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy。
对于5.5分的考生来说，只要文章意思的表达能够被理解，有3、4句语法上的错误也是可以的。除了句型多样性以及语法的准确性，还包括标点符号的使用这几项注意下，尽量少犯错误。
这里小编建议考生能够在老师的指导下多多进行汉译英的造句练习，从较基础的简单句到基础的从句表达。5.5分并不需要学生写出多么复杂的句式结构，只要让自己的意思清晰而正确得表达出来，哪怕只是简单的句子也可以。
雅思写作5.5分好拿吗?从这四个评分标准考察下来，其实5.5分的雅思写作成绩算是一个入门的大众水平了，只要稍加努力即可。

⑺ 雅思青少年犯罪大作文开头怎么写

对于作文,是一大一小,两个作文一共三十分能拿快到二十分就已经相当的不错了。我只能告诉你一个学习作文的思路。作文这部分靠积累加上模仿,自己的思路毕竟

⑻ 雅思作文啊！！！

又错语法，又跑题，我想几率不大

雅思考试全程考试时间为2小时55分钟。其中，写作在听力、阅读部分之后出现，是笔试的最后一项。雅思写作考试要求在60分钟内完成两篇作文（Task 1 and Task 2）。写作中，以移民为主的培训类（General Training）和以留学为主的学术类（Academic）试题类型有所不同。

Task 1要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的文章。G类（培训类）要求考生针对题目要求写一封信来询问某方面信息或阐释某种状况。到目前为止，出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。而A类（学术类）则考核图表为主。考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格等。也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。另外，流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。
Task 2 要求考生在40分钟内写作一篇不少于250字的议论文。A类和G类在Task 2方面非常相似。考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳意见，或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点，或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办法。
雅思评分按9分制。基本上，移民或读语言学校起码要5分（Modest User）。留学需要6分（Competent User）以上。如果读的是法律、传媒、管理等名校的研究生的话，写作最好达到7分（Good User）。但考生最后写作成绩并不是Task 1和Task 2的简单平均，而是以Task 2为主。
雅思写作的评分标准不象四六级或托福采用整体式的评分，而是分项式评分（analytical scoring）。也就是说，考官给考生并不只打一个分数，而是根据具体的评分细则分项给分。
书信或图表评分标准：
Task 1（书信或图表）按照以下三方面评分：Task Fulfilment（完成任务）；Coherence and Cohesion（连贯与衔接）；Vocabulary and Sentence Structure（词汇与句子结构）。
Task Fulfilment指的是考生是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的指令。具体说来，书信作文应该完成书信的使命，题目里的每一项要求都不可或缺。图表作文应该在对于图表所给出的数据进行分析的基础上指出图表的总体趋势和走向，并点明与总趋势不相吻合的特殊之处，而且还要有数据的支持。
Coherence and Cohesion指的是文章通过一定的衔接手段（Cohesive Devices）来表明上下文的连贯性（Coherence）。衔接手段，或叫语篇纽带，经常用的有（logical）逻辑、（grammatical）语法和（semantic）语义三方面的连接词（connectors）。

Vocabulary and Sentence Structure指的是文章的语言表达。5分或5分以下的作文一般语法错误较多。6分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误，用词和句子基本准确。而7分以上的作文用词丰富（Variety）、句子结构复杂（Complexity）。

议论文评分标准：

Task 2（议论文）的三方面评分标准是：Arguments, Ideas and Evidence（论证，论点和论据）；Communicative Quality（交流质量）；Vocabulary and Sentence Structure（词汇与句子结构）。
Arguments, Ideas and evidence涉及对于议论文的内容要求。具体说来，应该是内容切题，论据合理，论证充分。
对于Ideas（内容）而言，应该注意的是不要出现跑题。有的考生由于词汇量有限，导致题目中的单词不认识，从而写作的时候写离题了。比如：Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest instry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Do you agree or disagree? 如果考生不懂international tourism是什么意思的话，这道题是没法写的。但是，雅思写作涉及的词汇量并不是大得令人生畏，大概有六七千左右。考生万一碰到个把单词不理解的话，完全可以通过上下文加以推测。比如上面这句话中tension可能是个生词，但是如果考生能想到rather than表示对比关系的话，可以推断tension应该和understanding（理解）形成反义词，那就应该是接近于误解，即紧张关系的意思。所以，对于单词，考生应该平时注意积累，应试时根据上下文推断。
有的考生可能题目里面每个单词都认识依然写跑题，那可能是因为对于所涉及的题材不了解，没话可说。比如：When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do
you agree or disagree with this opinion? 如果考生毫不了解所谓的传统技能和生活方式的话，肯定对此束手无策。雅思议论文涉及contemporary social issues of common interest（人们普遍感兴趣的当代社会问题），考生应该平时注意这方面的知识积累和主动思考。
另外，还有的考生不但认识题目中的每个单词，而且也熟悉话题，但依然写跑题，那很有可能是因为没有抓住写作重点。事实上，绝大多数考生写跑题都是因为这个因素。比如：There is an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. Analyze the possible causes of this phenomenon, and offer some recommendations. 许多考生都会注意到这道题考的是青少年犯罪话题，而且应该分析原因并提出解决办法。但是，如果原因只写了一段而建议写了数段的话，那么就是犯了忽略重点的错误。因为，如果没有把原因进行详细分析而贸然提出建议的话，这种建议是缺乏依据的。正确的做法应该是原因写二至三段，结果写一段。其次，考生还应注意到这道题考的不是泛泛的青少年犯罪的原因与解决方法，而是为什么现在青少年犯罪人数越来越多的原因和建议。由此看来，考生应该仔细审题，防止产生理解上的偏差。
对于Evidence（论据）来说，关键要合理，并且能够证明论点。比如Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and trying to protect these animals is a waste of resources. Do you agree or disagree? 有同学这样写道：We can hardly imagine what our life will be like without wild animals. For example, if there is no cat, there will be more mice. The increase in the number of mice will result in the rection of food resources and the spread of diseases. Thus, it is very important to protect animals. 这里，猫的论据是不合适的，因为猫不属于wild animals（野生动物）。再比如，The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Do you agree or disagree? 有同学在论证这道题的时候举了赵括“纸上谈兵”的例子，说赵括就是典型的有很多兵法等理论知识，但是由于缺乏带兵打仗的实际经验，导致秦赵长平之战中赵兵大败，自己也命丧沙场，这充分说明了只有理论知识没有实际经验的恶果，所以应该重视实际经验。但这个论据也是不得体的，因为题目涉及的是大学应该怎么做，而赵括明显没有上过大学。事实上，古代的例子通常不适宜在雅思作文中出现，即便出现了，许多情况下只是作为反面例子与现今状况形成对比。
好的Arguments（论证）应该是充分并且有力的。这就需要运用多种论证手法。常用的论证手法有：explanation（解释说明），emphasis（强调论证），exemplification（举例说明），cause and effect（因果论证），comparison and contrast（比较与对比）facts and statistics（事实和统计数据），concession and refutation（让步与反驳），classification（分类），definition（下定义），analogy（比喻）等。论证手法的运用还应该和关联词结合起来。
Communicative Quality（交流质量）大体上与Task 1的Coherence and Cohesion相同，也涉及文章中代词，关联词，同义反义词等的运用。常用的关联词有：对比however, although, but, nevertheless；结果as a result, as a consequence, therefore, because of this, otherwise；附加in addition, additionally, and, as well as, furthermore, also, moreover；举例for example, for instance, such as, including；强调in fact, indeed；时间after, following, before, until, ring, between, while等。
议论文在Vocabulary and Sentence Structure方面与Task 1的要求相同。
雅思大作文题目 考过教育类 科技类 社会类 政府类 文化类 有的时候这几类有相互穿插或交织的可能