网络监管英语雅思大作文

Ⅰ 都是图表作文，考研英语2的大作文和雅思作文的难度相差大么

英语二的图表题跟雅思有一个不一样的地方
雅思图表题不要求写出自己的观点，内但是容英语二的图表题要求写出自己的观点
对于图表描述方面，英语二要求比雅思低一些
我当初是考雅思底子考的英语二，不知道作文多少，反正英语合格了

Ⅱ 网络监管和个人行为英语作文

there is no need to argue about it. freedom of speech is evil and censorship is needed, and that's it. why? because we should maintain the stability of the regime, and the rule of the party, so that those rulling families can continue to get benefits from the system and the people :)

Ⅲ 求大神解答，英语雅思大作文啊啊

The choice of single or several careers
What is known to us all that to have several careers or ways of earning money will be a new fashion. Opinions vary from person to person.
However I had to admit that it's a new fashion indeed. There's no need to drift with the current in the meantime. That's to say, the styles of making money are various: having a single career, or having several careers. The choose is up to yourself or your character even personal preference.
It seems to me that the person who was concentrated and modest is suitable for having a single career. He will be a nine-to-fiver. Maybe he just need a decent job and just because of the stability and satisfaction. But we're also clear that most of them are quite low in creative proctivity. This is in contrast to who choose the various ways to obtain employment. They always hunt for creative work to realize the value of life even to make choice to have several careers. Most dreams to display their talent and gain a sense of self-gratification. So no matter what happen to them is all possible. They also have a common characteristics which set a stage for their career is that they never stop trying and never give up.
As far as I'm concerned, I prefer to have a single career to realize my dream. My personality are more conservative and never do things by halves. So if I picked a career I will hold on to the last just like I choose a life partner. However, no matter you choose to a single career or several careers ,just keep holding on and you will be sucessful!

Ⅳ 雅思大作文范文：网络时代老师还重要吗

互联网+课程，不仅仅产生网络课程，更重要的是它让整个学校课程，从组织结构到基本内容都发生了巨大变化。正是因为具有海量资源的互联网的存在，才使得中小学各学科课程内容全面拓展与更新，适合中小学生的诸多前沿知识能够及时地进入课堂，成为学生的精神套餐，课程内容艺术化、生活化也变成现实。
互联网+教学，形成了网络教学平台、网络教学系统、网络教学资源、网络教学软件、网络教学视频等诸多全新的概念，由此，不但帮助教师树立了先进的教学理念，改变了课堂教学手段，大大提升了教学素养，而且，更令人兴奋的是传统的教学组织形式也发生了革命性的变化。正是因为互联网技术的发展，以先学后教为特征的“翻转课堂”才真正成为现实。同时，教学中的师生互动不再流于形式，通过互联网，完全突破了课堂上的时空限制。学生几乎可以随时随地随心地与同伴沟通，与老师交流。在互联网天地中，教师的主导作用达到了最高限度，教师通过移动终端，能即时地给予学生点拨指导，同时，教师不再居高临下地灌输知识，更多的是提供资源的链接，实施兴趣的激发，进行思维的引领。
互联网+学习，创造了如今十分红火的移动学习，但它绝对不仅仅是作为简单的即时随地可学习的一种方式而存在的概念，它代表的是学生学习观念与行为方式的转变。通过互联网，学生学习的主观能动性得以强化，他们在互联网世界中寻找到学习的需求与价值，寻找到不需要死记硬背的高效学习方式，寻找到可以解开他诸多学习疑惑的答案。当互联网技术成为学生手中的利器，学生才能真正确立主体地位，摆脱学习的被动感，自主学习才能从口号变为实际行动。互联网+学习，对于教师的影响同样是巨大的，教师远程培训的兴起完全基于互联网技术的发展，而教师终身学习的理念也在互联网世界里变得现实，对于多数使用互联网的教师来说，他十分清楚自己曾经拥有的知识，是以这样的速度在锐减老化，也真正懂得“弟子不必不如师，师不必贤于弟子”的道理。互联网不但改变着教师的教学态度和技能，同样也改变了教师的学习态度和方法。他不再以教师的权威俯视学生，而是真正蹲下身子与学生对话，成为学生的合作伙伴与他们共同进行探究式学习。
互联网+评价，这就是另一个热词“网评”，在教育领域里，网评已经成为现代教育教学管理工作的重要手段。学生通过网络平台，给教师的教育教学打分，教师通过网络途径给教育行政部门及领导打分，而行政机构也通过网络大数据对不同的学校、教师的教育教学活动及时进行相应的评价与监控，确保每个学校、教师都能获得良性发展。换句话说，在“互联网+”时代，教育领域里的每个人都是评价的主体也是评价的对象，而社会各阶层也将更容易通过网络介入对教育的评价。此外，互联网+评价改变的不仅仅是上述评价的方式，更大的变化还有评价的内容或标准。例如传统教育教学体制下，教师的教育教学水平基本由学生的成绩来体现，而在“互联网+”时代，教师的信息组织与整合、教师教育教学研究成果的转化、教师积累的经验通过互联网获得共享的程度等等，都将成为教师考评的重要指标。

Ⅳ 雅思+大作文（通讯类）+求高手评分

第一段：
1，daily名词的意思是日报。如果用做日常生活要写daily life.
2, telephone is undoubtedly the most successful one....语序失当，应为，undoubtedly，telephone is the most....
3, Our human beings没有这么用的， 什么叫我们人类。。。。改为 our community更合适。
4，Since everything has two sides, it also causessome troubles. 这句话纯粹中式英语，建议重写
5，Personally speaking太低端，改为 from my perspective，或者 In my opinion
6， I think 和 （Personally speaking）语义重复，删掉其中一个，或者直接说 I Suppose，不要用 think，太俗
第二段：
1， A large number of people太低级，初中用法。改为 a majority 更好
2， be addictive to 后面跟名词是没错，但是use显得多余而且冗长，直接跟smartphone就好，telephone这个词儿太老掉牙了
3，contact本身就是名词不用keep contacting，而且这句话和上半句显然是解释和递进关系而不是并列关系，你放个and做连词肯定是逻辑错误。用 to be more specific更恰当。
4，As a result太生硬，直接用consequently 或者 in consequence就好
5，什么叫their precious time is wasted？纯中式英语要重写
6， itestablishes gaps between people也是中式英语，可以改成，it has the side effect to strengthen family ties. 你太多相当然的中式英语了真的要扭过来不然没法提高
第三段
1， Though some disadvantages are there aboutthe telephone，这句话没意义。你想表示转折的方法很多，比如however，On the other hand，完全没必要堆字数写这么一句奇奇怪怪的话上去。
2， the telephone still has many ....这句话的冠词有问题，你是想表达手机有好处，那么应该是 telephones still have...建议你好好看一下 the a an 和复数的用法
3，In one hand，而不是 on one hand
4，it will be convenient， 没必要将来时，一般现在时即可，
5，it will be convenient for us and save time for us on the conditionthat it was used properly。这句话的含义我看不懂. 我知道你要表达的意思，建议你改写成：Large amounts of time and energy can be saved if certain applications of smartphones could be used by people in right way.
6, Within just a few seconds, we can ....雅思写作不但不建议用 I， you， 连we都要尽力避免，是因为正规的学术写作不允许这个。建议用形式主语代替，比如 it is easy to have a talk with....
7， just by dialing the correct number, correct 实在是多余，dialing a number即可
8，致命的错误！！！！On the other hand 一定是表示转折，谈论的是与你上篇相反的论点，而不是你现在的用法表示并列！！！！建议改成Additionally,
9, it can express our inner thoughts clearly through thetelephone. 改为 Smartphone can be used to express our inner thoughts clearly.....这个没必要用形式主语
10， Also, we can even be closer to each other via telephone communication.纯中式思想。。。建议改写。。。
11， We要避免 We just use the telephone to communicate with a remote friend frequently.这句话just加的好诡异，建议改成These are the dominate reasons for people to communicate their friends by smartphone frequently.
第四段
1，结尾太快，没有总结上文内容，这样的话段落完整分基本丢光了，重写吧骚年，至少重新总结一下正反双方观点。

我是一名海外在读博士生，已经留学四年，自认为英语还不错。你这篇文章我的评分是：4.5分
骚年还需努力啊，你离6还差距不小，词汇量和语法都太过单薄了，而且中式思维相当严重

Ⅵ 求一篇英语雅思大作文。关于学生学习国际新闻同意或不同意的作文。分四段。200词以上

Children in secondary school study international news as a subject, but some think that’s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today watching news, a means of learning what is happening around the world, has become a way of life to many people. When the value of news is undisputed, an issue of debate is whether it is necessary to include international news as part of school curriculum. I am of the opinion that it will be an enheartening/exciting change.

Ⅶ 求一篇英语雅思作文

一、雅思大作文开头：
开头要短小;要有立场和观点;避免模板。
如： the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?
Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not.
Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society.
As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons.
Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.
二、雅思大作文结构：
一个paragraph一个idea;避免过多examples, esp personal examples.;段落间的平衡
三、雅思大作文语言：
避免idioms, famous sayings
避免poetic language
Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way
Use “a mix of longer and short sentences”
以上从开头、结构、语言等三个方面对雅思大作文的写作技巧进行了简单的总结，建议考生们可以根据以上建议，并通过针对性的练习来逐步掌握雅思大作文的写作技巧，从而在雅思作文考试中取得更好的成绩。

Ⅷ 英语雅思大作文求提纲

雅思大作文的提纲可以去新通外语上看看询问一下，还有范文可以作参考。