雅思投诉类英语作文
A. 小弟最近考试遇到一些小麻烦,是关于一篇雅思类型的英语作文,字数150 不知从何入手。请各位前辈帮忙。
可以先夸一下澳大利亚,再夸一下RMIT。再解释一下自己出国以后好好学习的决心,然后收尾即可。
B. 雅思英语作文问题
故事是这样的
以前在各大学校里都流传着这么一个恐怖故事
说是A校有不干净的东西 每当十五的时候 学校门口的鲁迅像的眼睛就会动
所有教学楼都会停电
楼梯会从原来的13阶变成14阶
实验室的水龙头放出来的水会变成红色
还有1楼尽头的那个厕所只要有人进去了就再也出不来了
于是 一群不信邪的孩子们约好15那天去探险
晚上12点 他们准时来到了那所学校的门口
鲁迅像的眼睛望着左边 他们记下了 生怕出来的时候记不得有没有动过
他们来到了教室 打开开关 咦 不是亮着的么?
“骗人。”一个男孩发出抱怨
“再看看吧。”
来到了楼梯口 “1 2 3...13没错阿 是13阶阿?”
孩子们有点怀疑传说的真实性了
于是他们又来到了实验室 水龙头打开了 白花花的水流了出来
“真没劲阿 我们白来了!”
刚开始的刺激感都消去了一半。
最后 他们来到了那个厕所
女孩子虽然口上说不相信 可是还是不敢进去
于是让刚刚很拽地说不怕的小C进去
看了表 1点整
2分钟后 男生出来了
“切 都是骗人的”
孩子们不欢而散。
出门时 一个看门人发现了他们 喝斥他们怎么可以那么晚还在学校逗留。孩子们撒腿就跑
小B特地注意了一下门口的石像 没错 眼睛还是朝左看得
“骗人的”他嘀咕了一声
“喂 小B么?小C昨天晚上和你们一起出去玩 怎么还没回来?”第二天早上 小C的妈妈打电话过来询问。
小C也没有去学校上课
孩子们隐约感到不对了
于是 他们将晚上的探险之事告诉了老师和家长
大家在大人的陪同下回到了那个学校。
“什么? 我们的鲁迅像的眼睛一直是朝右看的阿。”校长听了孩子们的叙述 不可思议的说。
“可是我们昨天来的时候是朝左看的阿”
出门一看 果然 是朝右看得...
“可是昨天的确有电阿”
“昨天我们这里全区停电...你们怎么开得灯?”
“还有楼梯!”孩子们迅速跑到楼梯口
“1 2 3...12?”
“我们的楼梯一直是12阶的。”
“不可能!!!”
“还有实验室”一个孩子提醒道
“对 实验室”
一行人来到实验室 就在昨天他们开过的那个水龙头下 有一摊暗红色的痕迹。
“是血迹。”
“那...小C昨天还去过那个厕所...”大家都感到了一阵莫名的恐惧
“走 我们去看看”校长也意识到了事情的严重性
...
推开门...
小C的尸体赫然出现在大家的眼前
因为惊恐而睁大的双眼
被割断的喉管血淋淋的
内脏散落在已经干掉的水池里...
“阿...”小C的妈妈当场昏了过去
几个老师马上冲出去呕吐...
小B也被吓得目瞪口呆
在他晕过去的前一秒钟
他瞥见小C的手表
指针停在了1点...
就是小C进去的那个时候...
顺便说一下 他们去探险的那天晚上 并没有门卫...
将此贴转向5个以上的论坛不会魔鬼缠身且能实现一个愿望 。
不回帖者晚上凌晨过后往往......
对不起,我很不情愿,但是......请各位原谅!
C. 雅思考试投诉理由
雅思G类考生较少,所以对于G类的教材也比较少。在雅思G类小作文中,投诉信一直是常考话题,但是G类小作文投诉信可以从以下几个思路去发展:
一、投诉理由:服务不周
(一) 自我介绍,表明投诉内容以及与收信人的相关性。
(二) 陈述投诉内容,如时间、地点、人物、事件等,并指出对方服务问题所在以及由此而产生的对自己或者家人的影响。
(三) 提出整改建议或者希望得到对方的赔偿或补偿。
结合真题来分析一下: You just returned from a tour. However, you were dissatisfied with the service you received from the travel agency. Write a letter to the manager of the agency. In your letter,
1. give the details of your tour
2. explain why you were unhappy with the service
3. say what you want the company do for you
题目并无指明具体投诉内容,因此考生选择余地较大,一般来说,建议考生可以考虑旅行社安排的住所不好,比如房间脏等。具体写法如下:
The room was not cleaned on a daily basis and that my bed was made up only every three days.
还可以说房间没有热水,比如: The hot water was only supplied from 6:00 am to 10:00 pm, which means if I arrived back at the hotel late, it was impossible for me to take a shower with hot water.
二、投诉理由:质量低劣
(一)表明投诉原因以及与收信人的相关性。
(二)陈述投诉内容,如购买的时间、地点、人物等,并指出产品具体问题所在以及由此而产生的后果。
(三)希望得到对方的赔偿或补偿。
结合真题来分析一下: You have recently made a purchase from a department store in another town but found some problems with it after you returned home. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter,
1. say what proct you have bought
2. explain the problems
3. say what you would like them to do
题目并无指明具体产品,因此考生选择余地较大,一般来说,考生可以考虑服装。关于服装的投诉点,一般可以说新买的衣服褪色问题严重,品质有问题。
具体写法如下: The color of the sweater faded heavily and even dyed other clothes.
还可以说标签和配件丢失,比如: I put on the shirt that day when I returned home and found the buttons on the left sleeve were missing. Also, I couldn’t find the label of the shirt, so I was unable to know the proper way of washing or hanging it.
建议:考生可以在写投诉信的时候,参考上处的两个理由,以此作为切入点,这些理由可以被认为是“百搭理由”,适合套用在任何投诉信件中。
D. 您好,我想请问下您。我是英语本科毕业,毕业三年了,雅思6.5,口语才5.5.
有几个问题没弄明白。一,你说考教师资格证是澳洲的还是中国的?这两个完全不回一样答,标准什么都不同。二,你去澳洲读幼教硕士,目的是什么,是回中国发展做幼教,还是留在当地幼教,这两个也是完全不同的路线。三,雅思口语8.5分是一个很恐怖的分数,相当于母语国家水平的人的程度,一般口语6分,6.5分都算很不错了,好点的大学也就要求7分吧。
关于给你的我个人的建议,不管你是读硕士也好,读TAFE课程也罢,都涉及到语言关的通过。你本身是英专的,应该知道英语这门语言的基本结构,框架,还有如何学英语。但是你雅思成绩不理想和你是英专否,毕业三年否都没关系,只和你有没有认真准备雅思考试,了解这门考试技巧这些有关系。踏踏实实的静心下来准备雅思,以你的基础,考7分一点都不难。至于口语5.5可能比较差,找找是什么原因,发音?词汇?流利度不够?针对性练习!
加油,有任何问题欢迎交流,我本人也在备考雅思中,今年9月考!
E. 求一篇雅思的英语作文
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.
这是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文范文,相信对你有用,你也可以去看看其它的范文。
F. 雅思作文投诉信怎么写
雅思写作投诉信写法讲解
开头:Complaint –说明意图+解释情况+解决方案
1. I am writing to complain about…/that…
2. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something
3. I am most reluctant to complain, but…
4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a complaint about…
Examples:
I am writing to complain about the service on the Beijing-Shanghai train which I took on August 16, 2001.
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the Walkman I bought at the ty-free shop in your airport on February 14, 2005.
End of a complaint letter
1. I would be grateful / I shall appreciate it very much if you could take the matter into consideration and solve it at your earliest convenience.
2. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of…/ within 14 days.
雅思写作投诉信范文
Writing task 1
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my students, and I am falling behind in my assignments.
G. 求批改英语作文(IELTS)
Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?
Should men and women be equal? This is a much talked about question nowadays. In fact, sex is always a barrier for a woman to achieve their success in her career. I firmly believe that women should be given the same right as men, because they are equally important in all human activities.
First of all, with the rapidly development of society and economy, there have emerged many working opportunities and women are certainly as intelligent as men if they have a same ecation. Therefore, some high-level jobs are more occupied by women than the past. As this result, it proved that women have the same abilities as men. Personally, it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the abilities of men and women and it should be according to indivial abilities and not focus on the gender.
Secondly, the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Not all women are bad at business, just as not all men are poor interpersonal communicators. For example, if men are often calm and thoughtfully, but some men are more careless and hesitant than women? Beside, if women are always sensitive, then what would you say when they are insensitive in work or interpersonal. Obviously, there are no absolute advantages when considering their gender.
In conclusion, as a man, I would hopefully see that more outstanding women can be working their favourite jobs and can get their desirable position. Because a person’ indivial ability is far more important than their gender.
H. 什么样的类型的雅思口语考官应该被投诉
1.工作不到位,让你在门口等了很久的考官,正常规定考官也是要迎接考生的。
2.面瘫脸甚至有点不屑的,虽然考官可能听了太多模板太累,但让人感觉不重视雅思考试的考官还是值得投诉的。
3.不耐烦频繁打断你的回答的,造成你无法发挥出自己真实水平的。
I. 雅思培训类的作文中的投诉信可以怎么写呢
在我看来,雅思的培训类考试的小作文中的投诉信一直都是雅思官方考察的热门内容。一般集中投诉在宾馆,餐厅之类的地方。要想写好这类作文,一般在结构上可以分为三部分:
一、首先要进行自我介绍,明确你的投诉对象和投诉理由??
二、详细陈述原因,将自己不满意对方的内容详细的说出来,并指出他们的错误方面,即可能或已经对自己和朋友造成的影响。??
?三、对对方提出自己的要求u,比如建设建议等。