雅思一本令人激动的书英语作文
你好,很高兴为你解答:
雅思写作考试:时间也是60分钟。题目有两道,第一道是看图说明(A类),要求字,20分钟;第二道是议论文或说明文(议论为主),要求250字,40分钟。时间是合在一起的,最后一起收。最好在发卷子后先写大作文(250字的),因为占的分值大,最后剩下的时间写小作文。
建议不要背范文,考官也知道范文的。考官发现有雷同了,你的雅思写作分数会受到影响的!
雅思写作应注意:
1、注重写好文章的框架
我曾经问过我们世纪雅思的外教老师, 外国人看文章最注重的是什么, 他告诉我说是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好, 首先看的不是他的句型, 词汇, 或是论点等。 而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚,我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头,经过, 结尾。我们可以多用用连接词, 例如:first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等,另外可以多分自然段, 给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章, 看看他们的写作模式, 我当初写文章的时候, 用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式,我觉得可以套用, 我最后介绍给大家。
2、句型的多样化
如果一篇文章, 从头到尾, 永远用的只有一种句型, 那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分,我们可以适当的改换一下句型, 我给大家一定建议,希望给大家有点帮助。
3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ.主谓句;Ⅱ. There be;Ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子;Ⅳ. 被动语态(我看到一张帖字说, 不要用被动, 我不这样认为, 国外的文章, 用被动的也比比皆是。)
4、复杂句型 包括 Ⅰ. 并列句;Ⅱ. 从句(定语,状语,名词性,非谓语)
5.词汇的Variety
说实话做到这点真的很难, 首先你要有庞大的词汇量,第二你要用的恰当,不出错误。我自认做不到这点,所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇,例如:激烈的竞争 fierce competition等
6、多举EXAMPLE(重要)
大家不要小看这点, 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说, 这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理, 你有这么多话要说吗?而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友, 可以说她的英语基础很差, 但她的文章也拿了6分, 我问她怎么写的, 她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过外教老师, 他曾是IELTS的考官, 他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。
7、建议:
1)、写文章最关键的就是审题千万不要出错误, 不然就前功尽弃了。
2)例如我积累的句子:
Cultivate independence
Develop a strong sense of responsibility
Enhance social awareness
Build up one’s confidence and offer one’s a sense of achievement—realize ones value and capacity
Widen one’s horizon and sharp one’s character
这些句子比较常用, 而且在口语考试中也可以派上用处。最后给大家介绍一种写作模式,我觉得很不错:
With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. On one side of the debate are those who say that...... On the other side is the view that...... In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later .
There is no denying that ......has many positive effects. To begin with,......Secondly, ...... Finally, ......
However, every coin has its two sides. ......is no exception. Many opponents say that ......
To conclude, .....
祝你取得理想雅思成绩!!!
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2. 求一篇雅思的英语作文
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.
这是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文范文,相信对你有用,你也可以去看看其它的范文。
3. 一个英语作文雅思的求一篇范文
可以从个人发展和社会发展角度去探讨。
个人有权利追求更好的工作环境和待遇,以及在此专过程中自己水平的更属大提升;
这些有技术的高层次人才在发达国家工作,有利于更好的发挥自己的特长,从而带动全社会乃至全人类的发展和进步。
雅思还是要自己多写多练啦~~
4. 雅思写作推荐一本好书谢谢
你好,我是在世纪雅思学习的,我向你推荐《雅思9分密码》系列丛书内(共五册)针对雅思考试特点容,融入编者多年教学经验,以历届真题为蓝本精心编写而成。该丛书对听、说、读、写四部分的各种题型进行详细介绍和讲解,并配有高度仿真模拟测试题,全面强化考生的应试技能、通过对本系列丛书的学习,考生可以深入了解雅思考试命题规律,准确把握命题方向,达到高效备考的目的。作者介绍:
何满老师,世纪雅思(北京)副校长,著名雅思和托福考试培训教师,雅思培训界新生派的代表人物。对雅思考试的题型解题技巧及发展趋势把握精准,授课风格生动幽默,用最简洁的语言诠释雅思考试独创的“扫描跳读法”以及“象形记忆法”帮助众多中国考生攻克阅读难题,并一次性彻底摆脱背诵英语单词的苦恼。祝你取得理想雅思成绩!!!
5. 推荐一本雅思写作范文书
慎小复嶷除了《十天突破雅思写作制》还有一个6-9分范文(书皮都差不多,只不过《十天写作》主色是绿的,6-9分范文主色是蓝的),里面全是范文和对应范文的解析,应该合你胃口~剑8的我看过,剑9不知道有没有。不过从作文的角度来讲剑8剑9差不了多少吧,作文题目分类就那么多~
另外还有一个《雅思8分万能作文》,范文也不少,特别推荐小作文。他的大作文写的感觉不是很主流(即没有固定的套路,很随性,看起来感觉水平很高的样子),可以说是比较有特点,行文方式基本各不相同,看你喜不喜欢了。
《雅思8分万能作文》的PDF我在太傻上下过,后来又买的纸质的就删了。。。慎小嶷的书买的纸质的~
6. 雅思英语作文
建议抄首先可以参加袭北外雅思培训班,上完课后要整理笔记,总结开头-主体段落-结论的具体写法以及常用的语言结构。
考前50~60天,练习句子翻译考前40天,练习观点和词汇:挑选各个专题的话题若干,每天训练观点和词汇构思+段落写作;
考前30天:以熟练为主,完成写作训练。结合上课教授的写作方法和思路+每天构思得来的观点——不限时写作(每两天一篇)。
考前20天:挑选三种文体的代表作,请老师批改并面授点评,看看问题所在,有针对性提高和改正。
考前15天:限时写作,每天一到两篇,提高写作的感觉和速度。
7. 关于读大学一个激动的开始英语作文
My university life is interesting and different with before. we do not have to attend class everyday and i live with many classmates in dorm, far away with parents. At first, I got very nervous whenever I have to give my opinion and make a presentation in class, because I had not had such experiences before. However, I think that it is the valuable experiences to get accustomed to express my own opinions and feelings.
8. 请推荐一本特别好的雅思写作,和一本雅思单词.各一本就行
写作的话我推荐《雅思8分万能写作》,真心觉得这本书很好,而且书中的题和作文范例都比实际考试要难点。
口语的话我实在想不起任何一本书名。我自己用的比较多的是一本很小很迷你的书,里面有漫画的,你可以去书店找找看。我觉得口语书最有帮助的地方在于它可以告诉你一些技巧,比如时间掌握,语速和自信度这些方面,这些一般口语书都会讲。
至于雅思单词这方面我因为没背单词所以也不好推荐什么。我买了红皮的新东方雅思词汇,翻了翻感觉不错,但是我人太懒了所以没背单词凭猜读考的阅读。
9. 英语作文:一次令人激动的访问
Oct. 15 Wednesday Fine
We were very excited to hear that the Shenzhou-V carrying the 38-year-old astronaut Yang, lifted off on Wednesday at 9:00 a.m. at Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre, Gansu Province. After 21-hours and 23 minutes, the Shenzhou-V manned spacecraft landed in northern China. The success was exciting not only for all Chinese, but also for people around the world. That is an honor of our great motherland.
All of our classmates decide to study harder. We wish we could fly into the space by the spacecraft one day.
10月15日 星期三 晴
我们听到这个好消息简直太激动了,载着38岁宇航员杨利伟的神州五号载人航天飞机于上午九点钟在甘肃九泉卫星发射中心发射成功。21小时23分钟之后,它降落在中国北部。它的成功,不但使全中国振奋,而且也使全世界为之兴奋。这是我们伟大祖国的荣誉。
我们全体同学都决心加倍努力地学习。我们希望有一天,我们也能乘坐宇宙飞船飞往太空。
Oct. 15th Wednesday Fine
This morning China launched the first manned spacecraft.When we heard the great mews, we couldn't help cheering and dancing. The century-old dream has come true. It is important not only for our country, but also for the world. We are very happy to see our motherland becoming stronger. We are proud of her.
Now China's first astronaut, Yang Liwei has become our idol and it is the students' dream to work in the future for space exploration. So we must do our best to study. When we grow up, we will work hard to make our country richer and stronger.
10月15日 星期三 晴
今天我国第一架载人航天飞机发射成功。当我们听到这一特大好消息时,我们禁不住欢呼雀跃起来。千年的梦想得以实现。这不光是对我们国家,同时对整个世界都有着重要意义。我们高兴地看到,我们的祖国变得更加强盛。我们为她自豪。
现在我国第一名宇航员杨利伟已经成为同学们的偶像了,而他们的梦想就是将来去太空探险。所以我们必须尽最大努力搞好学习。等我们长大了,为祖国富强而奋斗。