英语美文阅读内容改版通知

1. 请帮忙修改+翻译英语文章~

1.We make a deal that we meet on xx road.
2.on xx road.
3.we start the meaningful activity.
4.We enjoy the experence,ring which i gain a truth-it is-
In our life,we must do many meaningful things,which seems very
hard,but when you try your best to manage it,you will get great happy and satisfy.
水平不怎么高 还凑合吧 呵呵
至于演讲稿 如果是非正式场合 则不用太版长 太长反而不好 显得权罗嗦

2. 修改英文文章

前两句是很中国的用法，要改为：

Is the range of infectious diseases changing or enlarging? Is the change caused by global warming or other reasons? Scientists are still arguing on these topics. The predictions(prediction这个词我觉得不太妥当) made in late 1990s said that the warming climate might be the cause that had caused the expansion of infectious diseases, while others said the report was too superficial. Scientist Lafferty said that disease carriers may move towards cold places for increased temperature(逻辑不通啊). Thus, hot places may survive（？？？）. However, others pointed out that the warming temperature does not cause this phenomenon. Although the range of infectious diseases is changing instead of enlarging, it may still bring bad influence over human beings, said Pascuel. As people love to move into crowded places, the changing of disease rang may have far-reaching influence on human beings . Scientist said that other factors may be the main reason of disease expanding(此句话很模糊，是什么因素呢？). We should find more data to solve this problem.

I agree with the scientist who said that it is other factors (什么？)rather than climate that may have a major role. With the fact that global warming is becoming a very hot topic these years, people tend to attribute all sufferings to climate changing. Scientists should spend more time on other factors in order to find the true cause.

Excuse me, but I want to ask a question,that is, is there any method to stop the expansion of infectious disease? I want to know how serious it is if the range of infectious disease enlarges?

3. 修改英语文章

My Dream Job
Expressing directly, I am going to be an outstanding scientist or mathematician in the future.
Some people may think that scientist or mathematician is a extremely boring job. That is why I am not understood. However, I don’ mind what they say.
I am really into math and science. I think the world was constructed by both of them. Needing to help myself, I want to know more about the secrets of the world. I also need other knowledge, but math and science are the most important.
In addition, I’m going to study the two subjects very hard. Therefore, I am studying the higher mathematics these days. After that, I am going to face to and solve some world math problems. And I am going to be the winner of some world math prizes.

4. 修改一段英语文章

I think I am a person with ability plus flexibility, for which I could apply and co-working well with a multi-cultural and diverse work force is not difficult for me.Having a stable personality and high sense of responsibility is desirable.Ambitious attitude is one of my features.Willing to assume responsibilities. I am thirsty for the great achievement.Being a happy and funny person, making others laugh is my hobby and I could handle the partnership with others.Good at dealing with personnel at all levels effectively.And what is the best about me is my ability to use Microsoft Office and typing at a fast speed. I hope that I can get a chance to serve the company.

5. 英语短篇美文（请大家往这里看！）

The beauty of the sunset【黄昏之美】

A Lifelong Career【学习：一生的事业】

heavy shoolwork【课业繁重】

Time【时间】

Work and Play【工作与娱乐】

My first Job【我的第一份工作】

My Favorite Sports【我最喜爱的运动】

6. 修改英语文章！~ 拜托

My family
My family is a big one with many members. My mother is an accountant,and she's close to me. Of course, she knows me a lot. And my father can be called fun-loving, he is a program-designer, who is always good at computer.
As for my grandmather, she is kind. She's old but good at thinking, and we communicate a lot. What's more,she is a very good cook as well as my grandfather.
My grandma likes reading books and grandpa thought of me as a very good child,but he died. I’ very sad about that.
In my family, I have six cousins, each of whom is frank to the others, making our family harmonous.
I love my family so much!

7. 怎么写英文期刊的文章修改稿的回信

开门见山说明来意就行。
Dear xxx:
Many thanks for the insightful comments and suggestions of the referees. I have made corresponding revision according to their advice. Words in blue are the changes I have made in the text（为了便于审稿人重审，一般把修改过的地内方用醒目颜色标容出）。
按照审稿人的意见逐条进行了修改
The following is the answers and revisions I have made in response to the reviewers' questions and suggestions on an item by item basis.
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8. 修改文章(英文)

More specifically, figure one illustrates the supply and demand curve for beers. As one can see, each price corresponds to different values for supply and demand, and the market equilibrium is reached at point E, at which the numerical value for supply equals that of demand. In other words, markets use data like these to find prices that will maximize both efficiency and profit while lowering the cost.

Also, according to the diagram, one can see that when the price of beer reaches 5￡, it exceeds the expected price, and since common people cannot afford such expensive beer, the demand will eventually drop down to zero, as no one will want to buy beer. On the other hand, when prices are down as low as 1￡, the demand for beer is so high that supply simply cannot meet demand, and sinks to a value of 0.

In conclusion, it can be seen that supply and demand depend on each other, and that a slight change in one value can lead to drastic changes in the other.

～ 如果要谈 Supply 和 Demand，一般都是把 supply 放前面 "supply and demand."
～ 没有 allocate efficiency 这种说法的。应该用 "Maximize efficiency"

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我帮你把句子的顺序改了一下，把语法错误都改了。
然后我加了一些新的句子，去掉了一些不需要的句子。
最后加了一个小小的 Conclusion. 希望对你有帮助！

9. 英语美文阅读

Right Beside You 身边总有你

The passengers on the bus watched sympathetically as the young woman with the white cane made her way1 carefully up the steps. She paid the driver and then, using her hands to feel the location of the seats, settled in to one. She placed her briefcase on her lap and rested her cane against her leg.
It had been a year since Susan, thirty-four, became blind. As the result of a medical accident she was sightless, suddenly thrown into a world of darkness, anger, frustration and self-pity. All she had to cling to2 was her husband Mark.
Mark was an Air Force officer and he loved Susan with all his heart. When she first lost her sight, he watched her sink into despair and he became determined to use every means possible to help his wife.
Finally, Susan felt ready to return to her job, but how would she get there? She used to take the bus, but she was now too frightened to get around the city by herself. Mark volunteered to ride the bus with Susan each morning and evening until she got the hang of3 it. And that is exactly what happened.
For two weeks, Mark, military uniform and all, accompanied Susan to and from work each day. He taught her how to rely on her other senses, specifically her hearing, to determine where she was and how to adapt to4 her new environment. He helped her befriend the bus drivers who could watch out for her, and save her a seat.
Each morning they made the journey together, and Mark would take a taxi back to his office. Although that meant he had to travel through the city and the routine was costly and exhausting, Mark knew it was only a matter of① time before Susan would be able to ride the bus on her own. He believed in her.
Finally, Susan decided that she was ready to try the trip on her own. Monday morning arrived. Before she left, she embraced her husband tightly. Her eyes filled with tears of gratitude for his loyalty, his patience, and his love. She said good-bye and, for the first time, they went their separate ways. Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday... Each day on her own went perfectly, and a wild gaiety5 took hold of Susan. She was doing it! She was going to work all by herself!
On Friday morning, Susan took the bus to work as usual. As she was exiting the bus, the driver said, “Miss, I sure envy you.” Curious, Susan asked the driver why.
“You know, every morning for the past week, a fine looking gentleman in a military uniform has been standing across the corner watching you when you get off the bus. He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches you until you enter your office building. Then he blows you a kiss, gives you a salute6 and walks away. You are one lucky lady,” the bus driver said.
Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. She was so lucky for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight, a gift she didn't need to see to believe—the gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.

当这个手持白杖的年轻女子小心翼翼地上车时，车上的乘客都向她投去怜悯的目光。她向司机付了车费之后，双手摸索着座位，然后坐好，把公文包放在膝盖上，手杖靠着腿。
34岁的苏珊失明已有一年了。一起医疗事故夺去了她的视力，她顿时陷入黑暗之中，内心充满愤怒、沮丧，还有顾影自怜，而她可以依靠的只有她的丈夫马克了。
马克是名空军军官，他深爱着苏珊。苏珊失明的头些日子，他眼睁睁地看着妻子陷入绝望，心里打定主意，要尽一切办法帮助她。
苏珊终于愿意重返工作岗位了。可她怎么去上班呢？以前都是乘公交车去的，但是她现在很害怕，自己一个人不敢在城里转。于是马克自告奋勇早晚坐公车接送，直到她可以一个人应付。这就是事情的经过。
整整两周，马克每天都一身戎装，陪着苏珊一起上下班，教她怎么凭借其他感官，尤其是听觉，判断她所处的位置，以及如何适应新的环境。他还帮她与司机交好，这样司机能照顾她，并给她留个座位。
每天早上，他们都一起同行，然后马克再乘出租车回去上班。尽管马克得穿过整座城市，而且疲惫不堪，又花费不菲，但是他坚信苏珊一定能独立乘车的，只是时间问题。
最后，苏珊决定自己独自坐车上班。星期一上午，临行前，她紧紧地拥抱着自己的丈夫，眼里蓄满了感激的泪水，感谢他的忠诚，他的耐心，还有他的爱。她向他道了别，他们第一次朝着不同的方向走去。周一、周二、周三、周四……每天她的独行之旅都很顺利，苏珊感到一阵狂喜。她成功了！她真的能一个人去上班了！
周五早上，苏珊照常乘公共汽车去上班。就要下车了，司机说：“小姐，我真羡慕你啊。”苏珊感到很奇怪，便问司机为什么。
“是这样的，上星期，每天早上都有一个仪表堂堂穿着军装的男士一直站在拐弯处看着你下车，看着你安全地穿过街道，又看着你走进办公楼，他向你飞一个吻，冲你行个礼，然后才动身离去。你真是个幸运的姑娘啊！” 司机说。
苏珊的脸上流下幸福的泪水。她是幸运的，因为马克给了她比视力更珍贵的礼物，一份她不需要看就能体会到的礼物——这就是爱的礼物，它能给黑暗带来光明。

10. 英语短篇文章修改拜托各位大神

Today it was 10 1rt, my grandmather asked me to come(go) back to the hometown to visit him.i hadn't came(gone) back (to)my hometown for ages.So i decided to visit my grandfather.To my surprised(surprise),there were many great changes (which )had happened in (the )past years.There were many tall and modern building which hand't been there(were not there) before.And the ways(streets更好) were wider and more smooth(SMOOTHER) .I knew my hometown better after this time (WHEN) i went back my hometown.I thinked(THOUGHT) i should go back (TO)my hometown more frequently.I was born there,like the son of her.One should never forget where he was born.

麻烦采纳，谢谢!